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hi all,
I am going to post a salary increment letter. kindly check and
give your feedback.

subject: salary increment and accommodation request

Dear Sir,
I've been working in your company for more than 4years. I believe that I have done my job well to the best of my ability & my skills are improved in the above mentioned time. I have thorough knowledge and understanding of the system. In order to give my best support I got training and certificate in oracle Database administration and oracle programming, which helps me to be a part of the development team.
My responsibilities includes  taking regular backup of database on daily basis, gathering user requirements and analyzing it to implement, developing a new module, modifying and testing the modules thoroughly before delivering it to the end user, keeping the alternate server in ready state to shift the database in an emergency, taking the responsibilities of my colleagues during their absence and all database administration activities like memory management, performance tuning , storage management, deadlock detection and so on.
You are aware that I got married recently. I want to bring my family and hence I request you to revise my salary and provide me an accommodation.

yours Sincerely,
mradb 
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Hello, mrbd—and welcome to English Forums.

Subject: Salary increment and accommodation request

Dear Mr [surname],

I've been working in our company for more than 4 years. I believe that I have done my job well and to the best of my ability, and my skills have improved significantly. I now have a thorough understanding of the system. In order to give my best effort, I acquired a certificate in Oracle database administration and Oracle programming, which has helped me to become an important part of the development team.

My responsibilities include making daily backups of the database, gathering user requirements and analyzing that information to develop and implement new modules, modifying and testing the modules thoroughly before delivering them to the end user, maintaining the alternate server in a ready state to accept the database in an emergency, taking on the responsibilities of my colleagues during their absence, and participating in all database administration activities: memory management, performance tuning, storage management, deadlock detection, and so on.

In addition, I have recently been married, and I hope to bring my family here as soon as possible.

Therefore, I would like to request a salary increment, and I would also be grateful if you could provide me with family accommodations.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration.

Yours sincerely,

mradb
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to the best of my ability, and my skills
Is that comma required after ability?
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mrbdto the best of my ability, and my skills Is that comma required after ability?
Yes, absolutely. It separates the 2 independent clauses.
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Sir I ve working 3 years this year only salary increment 200 iam typist labour imigration work khalid al haj group of company

Dear sir,

We have send the mails impressive get the your salary problem solve in with time to time becouse you get the per month increesssed salary Rs.5000/- per month.

Dear Sir


I m already send a mail for sallery increament but no response.

I m working in since 13-14 months.

sir pls help me

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