Dear Sir/madam,

Kindly review and fine tune the below letter prepared my me as below:-

Dear sir,

I have been working with XYZ since 2007 and have renewed by contract with the company on Mar.2010 for a further period of 3 years upto 29th April 2013.

Sir, i have not recieved an enhancement in my salary for the last 18 months, and being with my family in dubai, i am facing difficulties to make both ends meet.So i would humbly request you to revise my salary.

I am soo thankful to you for all the help and support given to me and in return, i will continue to be dedicated and sincere towards our company in all its future buildup and growth.

Thanks,

Best Regards,
Dear Mr [surname],

I have been working with XYZ since 2007, and I had my contract renewed in March 2010 for a further period of 3 years to 29 April 2013.

However, I have not received a salary increment for the last 18 months, and since I have my family with me in Dubai, I am having difficulty making both ends meet, so I would like to request a salary increment.

I am very thankful to you for all the help and support given to me, and in return, I will continue to be dedicated to our company in its future growth.

Thank you very much for your consideration of my request.

Best regards,