re: Sample Cover Letter page 2

Hi,

You are quoting Guest's original query that started this entire thread. Did you read the answer that was given? It included a lot of excellent detail on

WRITING EFFECTIVE COVER LETTERS

When you have read this, why don't you try to write a letter, and then show it to us. OK?

Best wishes, Clive

GuestHow do i write a cover letter job to a college or university department enquiring about a teaching position within their art department? I don not need student cover letter help. Should I fax cover letter or email cover letter...

very old but still very useful reference...thank you hitchhiker

GuestHow do i write a cover letter job to a college or university department enquiring about a teaching position within their art department? I don not need student cover letter help. Should I fax cover letter or email cover letter...

what do u think, any comments or suggestions plz

Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my interest in your current opening for an Electrical Engineer; therefore, please allow me to submit my résumé for your review. I am confident that I can make a valuable contribution to your organization’s future projects and initiatives.

I am a gas turbine operation engineer in Wadi Hof gas turbine power station, I am responsible of the operation Gas Turbine power plant including responding to the sudden equipment failure and malfunction by conducting suitable troubleshooting analysis thus leading to re-entering the equipment in operation shortly.

Also I have spent my summer training courses in different leading companies in the field of electrical engineering and its industrial applications and that gains me a lot of practical experience that improves my understanding to the academic study in the college and improves my technical skills.

My résumé contains details regarding my career accomplishments. I would welcome an opportunity for a personal interview to discuss your organization’s needs and the results you can expect from me in addressing those needs. And I thank you in advance for your time and review of my qualifications.

Sincerely,

Eng/ Ahmed Zaki

Hi,

I think this is pretty good. I've offered some suggestions.

Best wishes, Clive

Dear Sir,

I am writing to express my interest in your current opening for an Electrical Engineer; therefore, please allow me to submit my résumé for your review. I am confident that I can make a valuable contribution to your organization’s future projects and initiatives.

I am a gas turbine operation engineer in rhe Wadi Hof gas turbine power station. I am responsible for the operation Gas Turbine power plant, including responding to sudden equipment failure and malfunction by conducting suitable troubleshooting analysis to return the equipment to operation quickly.

In addition, I have spent my summer training courses in different leading companies in the field of electrical engineering and its industrial applications, and that has gained me a lot of practical experience and improved both my understanding in my academic college studies and my technical skills.

My résumé contains details regarding my career accomplishments. I would welcome an opportunity for a personal interview to discuss your organization’s needs and the results you can expect from me in addressing those needs. I thank you in advance for your time and review of my qualifications.

Sincerely,

Eng/ Ahmed Zaki

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