One of the most important things for development of the country is the education, because the education give to the human been the capacity to develop your avilities. So the education give the oportunity to improve our avilities.
And grow in knowledge like science, literature, math, history, necesary too to personal kwnoledge.
There are two insitutions that give us this education, schools and homes. What is the most important?
In this issue I propose that home is the most important, but no for that the unique necessary.
Before eighteens the most people go to the schools, here we learn many things which helped to comprend the world, in all aspects, science, history, biology, philosophie, basic aspects necesary for begin university studies or work in a job, indeed the tools necesary to work and develop science, wish are the activities necesaries to develop one country. But there are other important things necessary to personal grow, I refer to a ethic values, obiously that depend of the family values. But the values with no can learn in a book because they are part of our lives and the people around. The teacher can say “this is wrong” , but for a children this is not suficient to learn because they need see frecuently a good behaviour of your parents and control of the things children do. And in a class the teacher haven’t control of all students.
Now if we consider both aspects of education, knoledge and values, clarely families and schools are very important in the education. But today when we see how many children kill your companion in schools for example, I think that the home education is more important that school education but no for that the unique.
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One of the most important things for development of the country is the education, because the education give to the human been the capacity to develop your avilities. So the education give the oportunity to improve our avilities.
And grow in knowledge like science, literature, math, history, necesary too to personal kwnoledge.
There are two insitutions that give us this education, schools and homes. What is the most important?
In this issue I propose that home is the most important, but no for that the unique necessary.
Before eighteens the most people go to the schools, here we learn many things which helped to comprend the world, in all aspects, science, history, biology, philosophie, basic aspects necesary for begin university studies or work in a job, indeed the tools necesary to work and develop science, wish are the activities necesaries to develop one country. But there are other important things necessary to personal grow, I refer to a ethic values, obiously that depend of the family values. But the values with no can learn in a book because they are part of our lives and the people around. The teacher can say “this is wrong” , but for a children this is not suficient to learn because they need see frecuently a good behaviour of your parents and control of the things children do. And in a class the teacher haven’t control of all students.
Now if we consider both aspects of education, knoledge and values, clarely families and schools are very important in the education. But today when we see how many children kill your companion in schools for example, I think that the home education is more important that school education but no for that the unique.


One of the most important activities for development of a country is the educating of its population, because education provide people with opportunity to develop their abilities. [1] It also allows people gain knowledge in science, literature, math, and history, all of which are necesary for personal knowledge.

There are two institutions that provide education: schools and homes. Which is more important?

In this essay I propose that home is more important, [but no for that the unique necessary.--don't undestand this]

Prior to age eighteen the most students go to school, where they learn many things to help comprend the world. To that end, the students learn science, history, biology, philosophy, and basic aspects necesary for future university studies or job-related skills. [indeed the tools necesary to work and develop science, wish are the activities necesaries to develop one country.--don't understand this.] But there are other important things [what things?] necessary for personal grow, which I refer to as morals, values, and ethics, all of which stem from the family upbringing. These morals, values and ethics are importants parts of our lives that cannot be taught from a book but must instead come family and friends. The teacher can say “this is wrong,” but for a child this is not sufficient because they need see good behaviour of the parents and learn parental control and discipline. And in a class teachers don't have control of all students.

Now if we consider both aspects of education, knowledge as well as morals, values, and ethics, clearly families and schools are very important in providing education. But today when we see how many children kill fellow students in schools, for example.

[1] There is no word "avility". I believe you meant "ability".

Guest,

You need to spell check your document more carefully. There were several spelling errors. I am not sure I interpreted your essay correctly, but I tried to say what I think you were saying. You will see some of my comments contained in the brackets. I hope this helps.

MountainHiker
Many many thanks for your time MountainHicker...I am preparing for GRE exam..the Issue is hard..
Thanks
Alejandro

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Alejandro,

I will have someone look into this for you and get back to you.

MountainHiker
Alejandro, your password has been re-emailed to your yahoo mail account (the account you advised when you registered with the user name 'Alejandro').
Cheers for now,
Mike
Sorry but I didn't receive any email in yahoo...and I can't use ***@hotmail.com because said that this email is summited
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O.K. .... We will get the "Super Technical Mod. Squad" to look into it further.
Sorry for the inconvenience.
Hi Alejandro,

What is the problem:

A) You have registered under the username 'Alejandro', and now you are trying to login, but you've forgotten your password.

B) You are trying to register a username with the email address ***@hotmail.com, but each time your application is rejected.
yuhuuuu..well I receive the password..I don't what happend before...well thanks all you..

A question..where can found people which want talk in msn often.

thanks
Alejandro
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