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For the sentences below, I would like to seek comments on whether the tenses is correct or not. Thanks


To ensure projects run smoothly, I apply my social skills to maintain a friendly communication environment with clients. I listen and understand the client’s concern and queries. I suggested enhancements or counter-proposals to save costs such as the arrangement of nighttime work changing to daytime work. For any additional works requested by clients, if there was no big cost implication, I would seek to incorporate it.

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Ben9108, I would like to seek comments on whether the tenses is correct or not.

No, they seem to be all over the place. Choose one verb form only and stick with it.

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Please comment the tenses below after my amendment. Thanks

To ensure projects run smoothly, I apply my social skills to maintain a friendly communication environment with clients. I listen and understand the client’s concern and queries. I suggest enhancements or counter-proposals to save costs such as the arrangement of nighttime work changing to daytime work. For any additional works requested by clients, if there is no big cost implication, I would seek to incorporate it.

Much better!

To ensure projects run smoothly, I apply my social skills to maintain a friendly communication environment with clients. I listen to and understand the client’s concerns and queries. I suggest enhancements or counter-proposals to save costs such as the arrangement of nighttime work changing to daytime work. For any additional work requested by clients, if there is no big cost implication, I seek to incorporate it.