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I would like to seek someone comments on my following sentences for describing selling points and strengths for a engineer. Thanks


1. My strength are thorough and care about the details. As a professional engineer, any information and decisions shared shall be precise.

2. I have project management experience. When I prepared project budget estimation, I consider all elements such as management, labor, materials and contingency.

3. During project implementation, I control of project activities to stay within schedule and budget.

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I think this is better.

1. I am thorough and I care about the details. As a professional engineer, I value precision.

2. I have project management experience, including all aspects of budget preparation.

3. During project implementation, I understand how to stay on schedule and within budget.