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Hi, is this sentence grammatically correct?

I need to reply to an email. The email is about some feedback of the job that was assigned to me. I need to check the details and give feedback if any information is missing from the list.


Dear ABC,

Please find the revised file as attached. Here are some feedback to take note;

1. Those highlighted in yellow have been proofread and rewrite.

2. Spotted some upper case errors in the title such as “In, For, etc.

3. Would suggest to provide more actors name instead of one.

4. There’s one title which I have highlighted in red: I found that the details is not belongs to that title. Either the title is wrong or the details is wrong. Please check and advise.


That’s all foe now.

Thank you.

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Dear ABC,

Here is the revised file with some feedback for you..

1. Items highlighted in yellow have been rewritten.

2. There are some upper case errors in the title such as In, For.

3. I suggest you provide more actors' names.

4. There’s one title which I have highlighted in red. I found that the details do not belongs to that title. Either the title is wrong or the details are wrong. Please check and advise.

Thanks,

DEF