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Hello!

Can you pelase read this sentence and see if it is OK?

I quote: ''On the basis of such an established procedure for the preparation of negotiation, (and on the basis of)analyses of reached agreements, (and on the basis of)coordination of attitudes and making concessions and approvals for concluding contracts, a regular supervision over the development of negotiation and, if necessary, reliability of the results of negotiations are ensured.''

I don't have the impression that its meaning is clear. Can you please help me.

Thank you
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I am not sure I helped, and I may have misinterpreted the writer's intent-- but at least it's a bit shorter!--

I quote: ''On the bases of such an established procedure in preparation for negotiation, analyses of reached agreements, and coordination of attitudes toward concessions and approvals for concluding contracts, the regular supervision over the negotiation as it develops and, if necessary, the reliability of the outcome are ensured.''
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You didn't misinterpret it at all, this is what I was looking for.Thank you