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6. Some people believe in capital punishment, while other people are against it; there are many opinions on this subject. (Remove redundancy)

7. Avoidance of tooling costs is accomplished if you pick a stock size. (Remove nominalizations)

8. She took dance classes. She had no natural grace or sense of rhythm. She eventually gave up the idea of becoming a dancer. (Remove choppiness)

9. Bears emerge from hibernation in the spring. They wander through wetlands. They feed mainly on grasses. (Remove choppiness)

10. Doonesbury cartoons satirize contemporary politics. Readers don't always find this funny. They demand that newspapers not carry the strip. (Combine the sentences using conjunctions)

11. They have finished the new product design. (Make passive)

12. The course will be finished by July. (Make active)

13. In the end we had eventually agreed to go by the shortest route. (Remove redundancy)

14. You can do this by subordinating the less to the more important ideas e.g. It was quite dark; for the sun had set an hour before and the moon had not yet risen when the thief carefully opened the door of his house and prepared to go about his business. (Remove choppiness)

15. This report is intended for people with some electronics background but have little or no knowledge of geophysical prospecting. (use parallelism)

16. The house will be built by the construction crew in five months. (make active)

17. The dolphins had learned many tricks. (make passive)

18. The police conducted an investigation into the matter. (Remove nominalizations)
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11. They have finished the new product design.

The new product design has been finished by them

17.The dolphins had learned many tricks. (make passive)

Many tricks had been learned by the dophins.
6. Some people believe in capital punishment, while other people are against it; there are many opinions on this subject.
There are many opinions on capital punishment - some people believe in it, others are against it.

8. She took dance classes. She had no natural grace or sense of rhythm. She eventually gave up the idea of becoming a dancer.
She took dance classes but had no natural grace or sense of rhythm and gave up the idea of becoming a dancer.

9. Bears emerge from hibernation in the spring. They wander through wetlands. They feed mainly on grasses. (Remove choppiness)
As bears emerge from hibernation, they start wandering through wetlands and feed mainly on grasses.

10. Doonesbury cartoons satirize contemporary politics. Readers don't always find this funny. They demand that newspapers not carry the strip.
Doonesbury cartoons satirize contemporary politics, yet readers don't always find this funny because they demand that newspapers not carry the strip.
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7. Avoidance of tooling costs is accomplished if you pick a stock size.
To avoid the tooling costs, pick a stock size.

11. They have finished the new product design.
The new product design has been finished.

12. The course will be finished by July.
They will finish the course by July.

13. In the end we had eventually agreed to go by the shortest route.
Finally, we agreed to go by the shortest route.

14. You can do this by subordinating the less to the more important ideas e.g. It was quite dark; for the sun had set an hour before and the moon had not yet risen when the thief carefully opened the door of his house and prepared to go about his business.
When the thief carefully opened the door of his house to prepare to go about his business, it was quite dark - the sun had set an hour ago and the moon had not yet risen.

15. This report is intended for people with some electronics background but have little or no knowledge of geophysical prospecting.
This report is intended for people with some electronics background and little or no knowledge of geophysical prospecting.

16. The house will be built by the construction crew in five months.
The construction crew will build the house in five months.

17. The dolphins had learned many tricks.
Many tricks had been learnt by the dolphins.

18. The police conducted an investigation into the matter.
The police investigated the matter.

Hope my suggestions would be useful to you. I needed some further information about the way I should transform the sentences and that is why I didn`t do the rest of them at that moment.
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