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Hi,
Please let me know if follow statements round correct grammatically:-

In long term I want to take the carte blanche of the company. I envision for myself a career straddling the highest levels of a business decision making of that organization.
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I'm is being repeated here.Is that okay?
It is a written statement, so 'I'm' is not used at all. The repetition of 'I am' is fine-- in fact, it is a touch of genius!
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dont I need to explain what I do as a systematic planer?

one more query:-

does "there go with oppurtunity and challenges?

Life has alyways thrown at me challenges and oppurtunities to learn new things and I have cheerfully accepted these.
dont I need to explain what I do as a systematic planer?
one more query:-
does "there go with oppurtunity and challenges?
Life has alyways thrown at me challenges and oppurtunities to learn new things and I have cheerfully accepted these.
dont I need to explain what I do as a systematic planner?-- No, the phrase explains itself: I can plan in a systematic way.

one more query:-
does "there go with oppurtunity and challenges?
Life has alyways thrown at me challenges and oppurtunities to learn new things and I have cheerfully accepted these.-- I don't understand the question, but the statement is weak and ineffective: life throws challenges and opportunities at all of us and we all accept them as cheerfully as we can. You have said nothing unique or interesting about yourself.
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Hi
I have written this as a concluding statement to my Personal statement. I have cited examples of challenges and opportunities in th eparagraphs. In totality this senetnce makes sense to me. However just to add I can put it like :-

One thing that has happened with me is that life has always thrown at me challenges and opportunities to learn new things and I have cheerfully accepted these and emerged out a winner.

Is this correct
please Mister.....tell me if "these is correct" or "them" is correct or "it" is correct for the underlined word, and also is this sentence is correct

One thing that has happened with me is that life has always thrown at me challenges and opportunities to learn new things and I have cheerfully accepted these and emerged out a winner.
nilabh_splease Mister..tell me if "these is correct" or "them" is correct or "it" is correct for the underlined word, and also is this sentence is correct

One thing that has happened with me is that life has always thrown at me challenges and opportunities to learn new things and I have cheerfully accepted these and emerged out a winner.

Well nilabh, it's not just "one thing". You are talking about many challenges and opportunities.
I agree also with Mr. M. that the statement is banal and uninteresting - everyone on the planet has challenges and opportunities especially where learning is involved; it's not unique to you. I'd encourage you to compose something more personal, specific, and original.

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I agree that life gives oppurtunity and challenges to all but not all accept it. People dont even realize that they have got some opportunity.
This statment as I mentioned in my previous post is not the only 1 sentence that I have written.Its a concluding sentence.
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