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Hello, 


I am not sure whether theese sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics.

Can you give me a hand with checking them

Thank you for your help.

1.What helps Appledaily finds its market niche is a group of media managers and experienced journalists who spend one year on market study.

2. Mozart is a prodigy child. By the age of five, his imagination and creativity enabled him to write remarkable symphonies that were better than other musicians. 57

3.What is the best way to receive high education is that all students should schedule a variety of academic disciplines as a part of their class programs other than their major’s core curriculum.

4. I find it useful to read Analects of Confucius, which helps me sharpen my critical thinking and analytical ability. It enables me to look at a range of social problems in perceptive, and find the true causes behind these issues. 64
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Hi,

I've tried to keep your words as much as possible. This is pretty good English.

Best wishes, Clive

1.What helps Appledaily finds its market niche is a group of media managers and experienced journalists who spent one year on a market study.

2. Mozart was a child prodigy. By the age of five, his imagination and creativity enabled him to write remarkable symphonies that were better than those of other musicians.

3.The best approach to high education is that all students should schedule as part of their class programs a variety of academic disciplines other than their major’s core curriculum.

4. I find it useful to read the Analects of Confucius, which helps me sharpen my critical thinking and analytical ability. It enables me to look at a range of social problems in perceptive, and find the true causes behind these issues.

Sorry for butting is, but shouldn't it be "What helps Apple daily find its etc..."?

And I have a question: what does "in perceptive" mean here? I've never seen that adjective used in that way... Thanks!
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"shouldn't it be "What helps Apple daily find its etc..."? I beleive so.
By the age of five, his imagination and creativity enabled him

Maybe, It does not nessesarily have to be " By the age of five, his imagination and creativity had enabled him ..", does it? [:^)]
Hi guys,

Yes. Should be 'find', not 'finds'.

'In perceptive' should be 'in perspective'. That's what I mistakenly read it as.

I apologize for my carelessness.

Now, for 'By the age of five, his imagination . . . enabled him to write symphonies...' If he wrote them before the age of 5, 'had enabled' is indeed better. If he wrote them when he was 5, simple past is fine. I'm not sure what the facts are. He was Mozart, so I guess he wrote symphonies when he was 2?

Best wishes, Clive
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CliveYes. Should be 'find', not 'finds'.

'In perceptive' should be 'in perspective'. That's what I mistakenly read it as.

Best wishes, Clive

Nothing to worry about, Clive... It's so much easier to read the answers to a post than to actually writethem... Emotion: smile