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Are the following sentences correct?

Due to the industrial strike that took place last week, the council has previously advised us that they will be collecting our bins this week.

Unfortunately, we have been emailing and calling them to give us an update on the collection. It does not look as if it will happen this week based on their backlog.

We are advising you to keep your recycle rubbish in your flats until we have the full capacity to reload the bins.

We understand how frustrating this might be for you, especially with the global outbreak.

We will do our utmost to ensure that this is resolved as soon as possible.

We thank you for your patience and understanding whilst we find a solution to this problem.

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Due to the industrial strike that took place last week, the council has previously advised us that they will be collecting our bins this week.

Unfortunately, although we have been emailing and calling them to give us an update on the collection. it does not look as if it will happen this week, based on their backlog.

We are advising you to keep your recycle rubbish in your flats until we have the full capacity to reload the bins.

We understand how frustrating this might be for you, especially with the global outbreak.

We will do our utmost to ensure that this is resolved as soon as possible.

We thank you for your patience and understanding whilst we find a solution to this problem.

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