1. I come from Ho Chi Minh, a city in the southern of VietNam.

  2. When I know the importance of English, I want to make a new start and IU seem like the ideal place. I would like to study in there and select Electric Enginerring.

  3. Studying at the University is very different. At the beginning it is difficult. It is completely different from what I experienced before. But I saw it as a challenge.

  4. I like the variety of Vietnam. It has every fruit and vegetable.

  5. I meet these people at a conference and get talking to them about studying abroad and my desire to go to the U.S

  6. She tells me how wonderful the U.S is, especially as a perfect place to study Science.

  7. One day, I wasy feeling miserble and talking about how dull and unexciting our program in here.

  8. I moved to my countryside with no access road, no running water, no elevtricity. That was the time I tried to create solar cook. I could cook without gas or electricity.

  9. I learnt to cook at the age of sixteen.

  10. Talking time out to vonlunteer and help other people is a rewarding experience.

  11. Green summer is a constructive activity for students.

  12. Doing part-time job when you are studing at the university is the most constructive way to havce life experience and save money.

  13. a gap year for adults is constructive time out. You can do anything you like to gain your knowledge and experience.

  14. John's childhood was miserble. He not only studied but also did part-time job. lookikng back on it, he regard as a constructive time. Throught hard works, he knew how to earn and save money.

  15. Don't work because of money. You should find a rewarding job. you should keep in mind that you go to work to learn experience. then when you have enough money, you should establish your own company.

  16. Going to Phu Quoc island is my rewarding experience.

  17. At fifty yeasrs old, he is an unemployed manager with no prospects.

  18. when Adam was young, he read all of books about life modivation, joined solf-skills course and worked part-time. He tried to gain his value. Then after he graduated from his university. He found a well-paid job, one thousand dollars.

  19. When you go to jungle, you need a itinerary. When you live you also need a purpose. Without direction, you wouldn't achieve anything in your life.

  20. In addition to these things you study at the university, if you know bodylanguage, how to work in groups, solve contradiction and other things, your job prospects will increase.

  21. this semester we have a elective subject. We have to select one of three subjects: Psychology, Logic and Business.

  22. Hanging out with friend in cafeteria is a fascinating activity.

  23. Watching HD movie is fascinating experience.

  24. Tu Vu is a maternity hospital.

  25. Sewing is a precise job.

  26. through education, you know how to gather fact information precisely.

  27. Mathermatics require you to ve precise. It's unlike Literature. In your soluntion, you have to follow exact steps. You cannot add or reduce any steps that you would rather like.

  28. He supervise the children not swimming near the deepest of the pool.

  29. Sanbastan is a funny lobster in a famoust Cartoon " fish fairy".

  30. Because Vu didn't take a nap, he lost his consciousness in the evening.

  31. Nam recruits me to join KDI institute.

  32. Dolphins rescue many drowned people in the ocean.

  33. Nhu paled and losted her consciousness. Then she felt down immediately.

  34. We need to recruit more members for our club.

  35. He rescued me from a big tiger.
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  1. I come from Ho Chi Minh, a city in the southern of VietNam.
  2. When I know the importance of English, I want to make a new start and IU seem like the ideal place. I would like to study in there and select Electric Enginerring.
  3. Studying at the University is very different. At the beginning it is difficult. It is completely different from what I experienced before. But I saw it as a challenge.
  4. I like the variety of Vietnam. It has every fruit and vegetable.
  5. I meet these people at a conference and get talking to them about studying abroad and my desire to go to the U.S
  6. She tells me how wonderful the U.S is, especially as a perfect place to study Science.
  7. One day, I wasy feeling miserble and talking about how dull and unexciting our program in here.
  8. I moved to my countryside with no access road, no running water, no elevtricity. That was the time I tried to create solar cook. I could cook without gas or electricity.
  9. I learnt to cook at the age of sixteen.
  10. Talking time out to vonlunteer and help other people is a rewarding experience.
  11. Green summer is a constructive activity for students.
  12. Doing part-time job when you are studing at the university is the most constructive way to havce life experience and save money.
  13. a gap year for adults is constructive time out. You can do anything you like to gain your knowledge and experience.
  14. John's childhood was miserble. He not only studied but also did part-time job. lookikng back on it, he regard as a constructive time. Throught hard works, he knew how to earn and save money.
  15. Don't work because of money. You should find a rewarding job. you should keep in mind that you go to work to learn experience. then when you have enough money, you should establish your own company.
  16. Going to Phu Quoc island is my rewarding experience.
  17. At fifty yeasrs old, he is an unemployed manager with no prospects.
  18. when Adam was young, he read all of books about life modivation, joined solf-skills course and worked part-time. He tried to gain his value. Then after he graduated from his university. He found a well-paid job, one thousand dollars.
  19. When you go to jungle, you need a itinerary. When you live you also need a purpose. Without direction, you wouldn't achieve anything in your life.
  20. In addition to these things you study at the university, if you know bodylanguage, how to work in groups, solve contradiction and other things, your job prospects will increase.
  21. this semester we have a elective subject. We have to select one of three subjects: Psychology, Logic and Business.
  22. I have underlined some problems. Please correct them and post your revised sentences.
  23. Hanging out with friend in cafeteria is a fascinating activity.
  24. Watching HD movie is fascinating experience.
  25. Tu Vu is a maternity hospital.
  26. Sewing is a precise job.
  27. through education, you know how to gather fact information precisely.
  28. Mathermatics require you to ve precise. It's unlike Literature. In your soluntion, you have to follow exact steps. You cannot add or reduce any steps that you would rather like.
  29. He supervise the children not swimming near the deepest of the pool.
  30. Sanbastan is a funny lobster in a famoust Cartoon " fish fairy".
  31. Because Vu didn't take a nap, he lost his consciousness in the evening.
  32. Nam recruits me to join KDI institute.
  33. Dolphins rescue many drowned people in the ocean.
  34. Nhu paled and losted her consciousness. Then she felt down immediately.
  35. We need to recruit more members for our club.
  36. He rescued me from a big tiger.
  1. I come from Ho Chi Minh, a city in the south of VietNam.

  2. When I knew the importance of English, I want to make a new start and IU seemingly like the ideal place. I would like to study there and choose Electrical Engineering.

  3. Studying at the university is very different. At the beginning it is difficult. It is completely different from what I experienced before. But I saw it as a challenge.

  4. She tells me how wonderful the U.S is, especially as a perfect place to study science.

  5. One day, I was feeling miserable and talking about how dull and unexciting our program here.

  6. I moved to my countryside with no access road, no running water, no electricity. That was the time I tried to create solar cooker. I could cook without gas or electricity.

  7. Taking time out to volunteer and help other people is a rewarding experience.

  8. Green Summer is a constructive activity for students.

  9. Doing part-time job when you are studying at the university is the most constructive way to gain life experience and save money.

  10. A gap year for adults is constructive time out. You can do anything you like to gain wide knowledge and experience.

  11. John's childhood was miserable. He not only studied but also did part-time job. Looking back on it, he regards as a constructive time. Through hard works, he knows how to earn and save money.

  12. Don't work because of money. You should find a rewarding job. You should keep in mind that you go to work to gain experience. Then when you have enough money, you should establish your own company.

  13. Going to Phu Quoc Island is my rewarding experience.

  14. At fifty years old, he is an unemployed manager with no prospects.

  15. When Adam was young, he read all books about life motivation, joined soft-skills course and worked part-time. He tried to increase his value. Then after he graduated from his university, he found a well-paid job, one thousand dollar.

  16. When you go to the jungle, you need the itinerary. When you live you also need a purpose. Without direction, you wouldn't achieve anything in your life.

  17. In addition to these things you study at the university, if you know body language, how to work in groups, solve problems (or resolve contradiction) and other things, your job prospects will increase.

  18. This semester we have a elective subject. We have to select one of three subjects: Psychology, Logic and Business.

  19. Hanging with friend at cafeteria is a fascinating activity.

  20. Watching HD movies are fascinating experience.

  21. Through education, you know how to gather fact and information precisely.

  22. Mathematics requires you to be precise. It's unlike Literature. In your solution, you have to follow exact steps. You cannot add or reduce any steps that you would like.

  23. He supervises the children not to swim near the deepest pool.

  24. Sanbastan is a funny lobster in a famous cartoon " fish fairy".

  25. Because Vu didn't take a nap, he lost his consciousness in the evening.

  26. Nam recruits me to join to KDI institute.

  27. Dolphins rescue many drowned people (or the drowned) in the ocean.

  28. Nhu paled and lost her consciousness. Then she fell down immediately.
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I come from Ho Chi Minh, a city in the south of VietNam.

When I knew the importance of English, I want to make a new start and IU seemingly like the ideal place. I would like to study there and choose Electrical Engineering.

Studying at the university is very different. At the beginning it is difficult. It is completely different from what I experienced before. But I saw it as a challenge.

I like the variety of Vietnam. It has every fruit and vegetable.

I meet these people at a conference and get talking to them about studying abroad and my desire to go to the U.S

She tells me how wonderful the U.S is, especially as a perfect place to study science.

One day, I was feeling miserable and talking about how dull and unexciting our program here.

I moved to my countryside with no access road, no running water, no electricity. That was the time I tried to create solar cooker. I could cook without gas or electricity.

I learnt to cook at the age of sixteen.

Taking time out to volunteer and help other people is a rewarding experience.

Green Summer is a constructive activity for students.

Doing part-time job when you are studying at the university is the most constructive way to gain life experience and save money.

A gap year for adults is constructive time out. You can do anything you like to gain wide knowledge and experience.

John's childhood was miserable. He not only studied but also did part-time job. Looking back on it, he regards as a constructive time. Through hard works, he knows how to earn and save money.

Don't work because of money. You should find a rewarding job. You should keep in mind that you go to work to gain experience. Then when you have enough money, you should establish your own company.

Going to Phu Quoc Island is my rewarding experience.

At fifty years old, he is an unemployed manager with no prospects.

When Adam was young, he read all books about life motivation, joined soft-skills course and worked part-time. He tried to increase his value. Then after he graduated from his university, he found a well-paid job, one thousand dollar.

When you go to the jungle, you need the itinerary. When you live you also need a purpose. Without direction, you wouldn't achieve anything in your life.

In addition to these things you study at the university, if you know body language, how to work in groups, solve problems (or resolve contradiction) and other things, your job prospects will increase.

This semester we have a elective subject. We have to select one of three subjects: Psychology, Logic and Business.

Hanging with friend at cafeteria is a fascinating activity.

Watching HD movies are fascinating experience.

Tu Vu is a maternity hospital.

Sewing is a precise job.

Through education, you know how to gather fact and information precisely.

Mathematics requires you to be precise. It's unlike Literature. In your solution, you have to follow exact steps. You cannot add or reduce any steps that you would like.

He supervises the children not to swim near the deepest pool.

Sanbastan is a funny lobster in a famous cartoon " fish fairy".

Because Vu didn't take a nap, he lost his consciousness in the evening.

Nam recruits me to join to KDI institute.

Dolphins rescue many drowned people (or the drowned) in the ocean.

Nhu paled and lost her consciousness. Then she fell down immediately.

We need to recruit more members for our club.

He rescued me from a big tiger.
I have fixed these:

When I discovered the importance of English, I wanted to make a new start and IU seems like the ideal place. I would like to study Electrical Engineering there.

Studying at university is very different. At the beginning it is difficult. It is completely different from what I experienced before. But I saw it as a challenge.

I like the variety in Vietnam. It has every fruit and vegetable.

One day, I was feeling miserable and talking about how dull and unexciting our program was here.

I moved to the countryside with no access road, no running water, and no electricity. That was the time I tried to create a solar cooker. I could cook without gas or electricity.

Having a part-time job when you are studying at university is the most constructive way to gain life experience and make money.

A gap year for adults is constructive time out. You can do anything you like to gain knowledge and experience.

John's childhood was miserable. He not only studied but also had a part-time job. Looking back on it, he regards it as a constructive time. Through hard work, he learnt how to earn and save money.

Don't work just for money. You should find a rewarding job. You should keep in mind that you go to work to gain experience. Then when you have enough money, you should establish your own company.

Going to Phu Quoc Island was a rewarding experience.

At fifty years of age, he is an unemployed manager with no prospects.

When Adam was young, he read many books about life motivation, joined soft-skills courses, and worked part-time. He tried to make his skills and talents more valuable. Then after he graduated from university, he found a well-paid job at one thousand dollars per month.

When you go into the jungle, you need a map. In life, you also need a purpose. Without direction, you won't achieve anything in your life.

In addition to the subjects you study at university, if you know body language, how to work in a group, solve problems and resolve contradictions and so forth, your job prospects will increase.

This semester we have an elective subject. We have to select one of three subjects: Psychology, Logic or Business.

Hanging out with friends in the cafeteria is a fascinating activity.

Watching HD movies is a fascinating experience.

Through education, you learn how to gather facts and other information precisely.

Mathematics requires you to be precise. It's unlike literature. To find your solution, you have to follow exact steps. You cannot add or subtract any steps that you would liketo.

He warns the children not to swim near the deepest pool.

Sanbastan is a funny lobster in a popular cartoon, "Fish Fairy".

Because Vu didn't take a nap, he fell asleep in the evening.

Nam recruited me to join to KDI Institute.

Dolphins rescue many drowningpeople.

Nhu paled and lost consciousness. Then she fell down immediately.

The others are correct as you wrote them.