Hi all,

Would somebody please comments the english?
Thanks,

Fizzi

“Xs will be asked to immediately put the completed questionnaire in a prepaid reply envelope provided to them by the researchers and place it in a secure place. Other people such as Ys or Zs are not allowed to get written consents from students"

"Xs will be asked to send the completed questionnaire to the researchers every week. If no result is received, we will contact Xs to remind them to send the completed questionnaire back to us. This will maintain the confidentiality, anonymity and minimize the risk of results being put in non-secure places”
Hi Fizzi,

A few suggestions.

Clive

“Xs will be asked to immediately put the completed questionnaire in a prepaid reply envelope provided to them by the researchers, and to store it in a secure place. Other people, such as Ys or Zs, are not allowed to get written consent from students."



"Xs will be asked to send a completed questionnaire to the researchers every week. If nothing is received, we will contact Xs to remind them to return the completed questionnaire.. This will maintain confidentiality and anonymity, and will minimize the risk of results being stored in non-secure places.”
Thanks for your suggestion Clive Emotion: big smile
Regards,
Fizzi