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Hi guys

Another simple composition for Primary 1 students. Could someone please edit this short composition for me. Thank you very much. Happy New Year.

My name is Wen Xu. I am seven years old. I am a tall and thin boy. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my brother and me.

I go to Westlake Primary School. I am in Primary 2. My favourite subject is English. I always do well in the English examinations.

I want to be a doctor when I grow up. That is why I am studying very hard.

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Simon wrote: 'I have four family members.' This could mean that you are excluded. In other words, there are five people, including you, in your family. That implies that there are five family members altogether.
My name is Wen Xu, seven years old and lanky boy. We are four in my family: my parents, my brother and I.
I go to Westlake Primary School as a Primary 2. My favourite subject is English and I always do well in every English examinations cause I want to be a doctor someday. That's why I am studying very hard.
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AnonymousMy name is Wen Xu, seven years old and lanky boy.
My name is Wen Xu. I am a tall, seven year old boy.
AnonymousWe are four in my family: my parents, my brother and I.
There are four people in my family: my parents, my brother and I.
AnonymousI go to Westlake Primary School as a Primary 2.
I go to Westlake Primary School and am in Primary 2.
AnonymousMy favourite subject is English and I always do well in every English examinations cause I want to be a doctor someday.
My favourite subject is English and I always do well in every English examination because I want to be a doctor someday. That's why I am studying very hard.
Wow nice😍
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