Hi guys

This composition is meant for the 1st-year students. Could someone please edit it for me? Thank you very much.

One sunny day, an old man was walking in the park when he tripped over a stone. Fortunately, a young man was jogging in the park. He quickly ran to help him. He asked whether he was badly injured. The man said that he was all right. He had only a very minor cut on his right knee. The young man was relieved on hearing that. He helped him up and led him to a bench. The young man then applied a piece of medicated plaster over the cut.

After that, he continued jogging, happy that he had done his best to help the old man.
Yoong LiatHi guys

This composition is meant for the 1st-year students. Could someone please edit it for me? Thank you very much.

One sunny day, an old man were walking in the park and accidentally tripped over a stone. Fortunately, a young man was jogging in the park as well. After seeing the old man fall, he quickly ran towards him to lend the him some assistance. He asked the old man whether he was injured. The old man said that he was fine. He only had a minor cut on his right knee. The young man was relieved to hear that. He helped the old man up, and led him to a nearby bench. The young man then applied a plaster over the wound. He continued jogging, happy that he could assist the old man.