Hi guys

This composition is meant for Year 1 students. Could someone please edit it for me. Thank you in advance.

It is raining heavily. Some of the roads are flooded. Wenxu was coming home from school. Luckily, he has brought an umbrella. He walks quickly to the bus stop to wait for the bus.

There are many people at the bus stop. Some of them are wet because they have been caught in the rain. Some people are running towards the bus stop.

Soon the bus Wenxu has been waiting for comes. He gets on the bus. It is crowded. Fortunately, Wen Xu finds a seat. When the bus is near his house, he gets off the bus. He is surprised to see his mother. She tells Wen Xu, “I thought you didn’t bring an umbrella. That’s why I have come here with another umbrella.” Wenxu thanks his mother and they walk home together.

It is raining heavily. Some of the roads are flooded. Wenxu is going home from school. Luckily, he has brought an umbrella. He walks quickly to the bus stop to wait for the bus.

There are many people at the bus stop. Some of them are wet because they have been caught in the rain. Some people are running towards the bus stop.

Soon the bus Wenxu has been waiting for comes along. He gets on the bus. It is crowded. Fortunately, Wen Xu finds a seat. When the bus is near his house, he gets off the bus. He is surprised to see his mother. She tells Wen Xu, “I thought you hadn't taken an umbrella. That’s why I have come here with another umbrella.” Wenxu thanks his mother and they walk home together.
Hi Nona

Many thanks for editing the composition.

Best regards