I would greatly appreciate anybody who would be willing to look over and improve (or just look over) a short story that I wrote for a scholarship.

Please PM me if you would be willing to help.

Thanks for your consideration.
Why can't you post it here? Is it a competition and you can't "publish" it beforehand?
Yeah, it's for a potential scholarship, and I don't want anyone stealing it.

Btw, I meant to say ask in this thread for a PM'd version.

Thanks!
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I still don't see why you can't post it...
I definetly would. I am a freshman in high school who is also looking for scholarships. I'd be happy to help you.
you probably should not post it public..
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