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A few miles down the highway, there was another toll highway. For the second time, I charged it to my toll card and hoped it was the last. Soon, it got to the town. The town was so scattered I had no idea where the company located. I looked at the map the HR provided and immediately cursed her in my mind. It seemed to only describe the company's surrounding major roads with a few crosses labeled with the names of some companies. It was 9.20 and I still had 40 minutes to search for it. I took my time and relied on my observation skills, paying attention to every road sign that indicate the industrial park.

Are there any mistakes?
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A few miles down the highway, there was another toll highway. For the second time, I charged it to my toll card and hoped it was the last. Soon, I it got to the town. The town was so spread out scattered (that) I had no idea where the company was located. I looked at the map the HR had provided and immediately cursed her in my mind. It seemed to only describe the company's surrounding major roads with a few crosses labeled with the names of some companies. It was 9.20 and I still had 40 minutes to find search for it. I took my time and relied on my observation skills, paying attention to every road sign that indicated the industrial park.

It only seemed to show the major roads near the company, and had a few crosses labeled with the names of some companies.
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Thanks, Optilang. I've got two questions.

1. Why is scattered wrong?

2. Why is search for wrong?