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Can you check and see which is better or give your comment on either syntax or vocabulary in this lenghty sentence?

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By the change of /Through changes of social relations/Through social changes and globalisation of market the position of cultural products is changed and there is a need for revaluation of utterly opposed stands/positions of high and popular culture.

Social changes and globalisation of market/market globalisation change the position of cultural products and call for revaluation of utterly opposed stands/positions of high and popular culture.
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AntonijaHello,

Can you check and see which is better or give your comment on either syntax or vocabulary in this lenghty sentence?

Thank you

By the change of /Through changes of social relations/Through social changes and globalisation of market the position of cultural products is changed and there is a need for revaluation of utterly opposed stands/positions of high and popular culture.

Social changes and globalisation of market/market globalisation change the position of cultural products and call for revaluation of utterly opposed stands/positions of high and popular culture.
Social change and the globalised market alter the status of cultural products and call for revaluation of the utterly opposed stances of high and popular culture.
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