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Many people think that difficult hobbies are more enjoyable. I partially disagree with this view, as now will be discussed.

Firstly, most people are more likely to have easy hobbies because they find them easy to do. One example of an activity that is easy for people is reading books. This hobby requires very little equipment, it’s simple to do and it is inexpensive too. You just need some books and a peaceful place. It not only brings about information, knowledge about everything in the world, etc but reading books also makes people relax after stressful hours. For another example, photography is easy to do. I think everyone can take some photos of interesting places without having a lot of technique. Taking photos also relaxes people’s minds.

On the other hand, difficult hobbies are enjoyable for some people. If an activity is more difficult, you must take much time to research and operate. A hobby that I think it’s difficult to do is film editing which requires a high level of knowledge and creation. In my case, I have researched for three years, as now I can edit the film, video easier and skillfully. I believe that when you have a difficult hobby, the result is better and the feeling of achievement is greater.

In conclusion, I partly disagree with the idea that having difficult hobbies is more enjoyable.

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Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you disagree or agree?

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Many people think that difficult hobbies are more enjoyable. I partially disagree with this view. Although simple activities give immediate pleasure, challenging ones are much more intellectually rewarding. , as now will be discussed (That is not good. The examiner knows the format of an essay. They know you are writing an essay. They know the body paragraphs come next. Do not tell them this information.)

Firstly, First, most people are more likely to have easy hobbies because they find them simple easy (Be careful of too much repetition.) to do. One example of this of an activity that is easy for people is reading books. This hobby requires very little equipment, it’s (Do not use contractions in formal writing.) satisfying simple to do and it is inexpensive too. You just need some books and a peaceful place. It not only brings about information, knowledge (missing conjunction) about everything in the world, etc (Do not use "etc." or "..." or "and so on" in formal writing.) but reading books also makes people relax after stressful hours. For a n Another example is photography is easy to do. I think everyone can take some photos of interesting places without having a lot of expertise. technique. Taking photos also relaxes people’s minds.

On the other hand, difficult hobbies are enjoyable for some people. If an activity is more difficult, you must take much time to research all the rules and procedures. and operate. A hobby that I think it’s is difficult to do is film editing which requires a high level of knowledge and imagination. creation. In my case, I have researched this subject for three years, as now I can edit the film, video (missing conjunction) easier and skillfully. I believe that When you have a difficult hobby, the result is better and the feeling of achievement is greater.

In conclusion, I partly disagree with the idea that having difficult hobbies is more enjoyable.