In recent year, people have paid more attention to the topic of media. While some people think that papers are the perfect method to gather information, others believe that people are able to use other means of media from television to Internet in order to explore information. I personally believe that using press paper is no longer the best way to learn news due to the development of online news resources.
There are some reasons why people support newspaper still hold the most popular position in learning news. Firstly, newspaper have existed before introduction Internet. It is result in picking up a habit of reading a newspaper, and they do not want to change then, especially the old people. Secondly, newspaper's content usually must be through heavily censored before being broadcasted, which avoid spread misleading information. Otherwise, when reading papers, not only people can broaden the horizon but also they can improve and boost their vocabulary and language. For instance, reading foreign newspaper, people's vocabulary is able to improve more clearly.
However, I agree with those who argue that to gain information from other means is more effective method. To start with, the technology becomes increase and improve, thus, the media is also becoming development. People can access and look out a huge storage of news in just a few clicks. At present, people tend to use social platform such as Facebook, Instagram, Zalo, Tik tok, and so on. Therfore, they are able to read news on this instead of newspapers. Furthermore, when reading some news on social platforms, spectators are provided many comprehensive analysis about various aspects instead of oneside.
To sum up, although it is believed that newspapers are very common amongst certain groups of people, I am opinion that it is the best way to receive the news as more and more people are using the Internet or social platforms.
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Some people believe that newspaper í the best way to learn about news. While others believe that a more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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In recent year, people have paid more attention to the topic of media. (That makes no sense. What do you mean?) While some people think that papers (wrong word) are the perfect method to gather information, others believe that people are able to use other means of media from television to Internet in order to explore information. (That is off-topic.) I personally believe that using press paper (wrong phrase) is no longer the best way to learn news due to the development of online news resources.
There are some reasons why people support newspaper still hold (ungrammatical structure you cannot have two verbs with one subject.) the most popular position in learning (wrong word) news. Firstly, First, newspaper (wrong form) have existed before introduction Internet. (wrong phrase) It is result (wrong phrase) in picking up a habit of reading a newspaper, and they do not want to change then, (wrong word) especially the old people. (wrong placement of phrase) Secondly, Second, any newspaper's content usually must be through heavily censored (wrong word - When information is censored, truthful and accurate information may be deleted by the authorities. ) before being broadcasted, (You are talking about paper - it is not broadcasted.) which avoid (wrong form) spread misleading information. Otherwise, when reading papers, not only people can broaden the horizon but also they can improve and boost their vocabulary and language. For instance, reading foreign newspaper, (ungrammatical - bad English) people's vocabulary is able to improve more clearly.
However, I agree with those who argue that to gain information from other means is more effective method. To start with, the technology becomes increase and improve, (very poor English) thus, the media is also becoming development. (wrong usage - media is not development. ) People can access and look out (wrong usage) a huge storage (wrong word) of news in just a few clicks. At present, people tend to use social platform such as Facebook, Instagram, Zalo, Tik tok, and so on. Therfore, they are able to read news on this instead of newspapers. Furthermore, when reading some news on social platforms, spectators are provided many comprehensive analysis about various aspects instead of oneside.
To sum up, although it is believed that newspapers are very common amongst certain groups of people, I am opinion (You are a person, not an opinion.) that it ("it" refers to "Reading newspapers" - you stated exactly the opposite of what you meant to say. ) is the best way to receive the news as more and more people are using the Internet or social platforms.
Learn how to use the word "technology".
