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Ielts Task 2 Answer-

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IELTS writing task 2-

People grab information, evaluate them and increase their knowledge in terms of being intellectual as in this planet wisdom is the gateway to the world. Nevertheless, sharing certain information can be offensive too. By considering both portion,it is too share information as much possible or too valuable to be shared openly, I will conclude with my opinion.


Certain human being confide that it is informative to share actuality forasmuch as it helps to grow othars and to be more intelligent by availing knowledge. Moreover, several information can be upgraded by other researchers which help us to perceive accurate information. For instance - in early Mesopotamian mythology, the world was portrayed as a disk floating in the ocean with a hemispherical sky-dome above, this information was displaced by the concept of a spherical earth later around 5th century, BC when it appears in the writings of Greek philosophers.
On the contrary, Others consider that certain informations are too rich to demonstrate openly since some facts can be confidential and it is wiser to maintain privacy. Again, by providing those kind of confidential information to others, a company can face demolition. For instance - if an employee of a company provide information of their upcoming projects and concepts of their work to others,then anyone can cause harm by sharing those data to their competitive companies, which will be a great loss for this company.
To conclude, My assumption is that in this world we should learn and for that people should be helpful by sharing actuality about scientific inventions, business and the bookish world. Meanwhile, people also need to acquainted differentiating between which information is confidential and which is intellectual.

IELTS writing task 2-

People grab information, evaluate them and increase their knowledge in terms of being intellectual as in this planet wisdom is the gateway to the world. Nevertheless, sharing certain information can be offensive too. By considering both portion,it is too share information as much possible or too valuable to be shared openly, I will conclude with my opinion.


Certain human being confide that it is informative to share actuality forasmuch as it helps to grow othars and to be more intelligent by availing knowledge. Moreover, several information can be upgraded by other researchers which help us to perceive accurate information. For instance - in early Mesopotamian mythology, the world was portrayed as a disk floating in the ocean with a hemispherical sky-dome above, this information was displaced by the concept of a spherical earth later around 5th century, BC when it appears in the writings of Greek philosophers.
On the contrary, Others consider that certain informations are too rich to demonstrate openly since some facts can be confidential and it is wiser to maintain privacy. Again, by providing those kind of confidential information to others, a company can face demolition. For instance - if an employee of a company provide information of their upcoming projects and concepts of their work to others,then anyone can cause harm by sharing those data to their competitive companies, which will be a great loss for this company.
To conclude, My assumption is that in this world we should learn and for that people should be helpful by sharing actuality about scientific inventions, business and the bookish world. Meanwhile, people also need to acquainted differentiating between which information is confidential and which is intellectual.

People grab Researchers collect information, evaluate and analyze it, them and that increases their knowledge in terms of understanding a particular issue or field. being intellectual as in this planet wisdom is the gateway to the world. Nevertheless, sharing certain information can be controversial. I believe that information sharing is useful, but that does not apply to everything. offensive too. By considering both portion,it is too share information as much possible or too valuable to be shared openly, I will conclude with my opinion.

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The rest of your text is mostly ungrammatical and unnatural. Essays are highly formal and structured texts; every sentence in an essay has a particular role. Take a look at my replies in the links below to learn about essay structure.

https://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayAgreeDisagreeYoungEnjoyLife-Older/bjnlwx/post.htm

https://www.englishforums.com/English/CanAnyoneCheckEssay/bwpzmg/post.htm

For your essay, it would be easier for you to partially agree. The first thing you should do is brainstorm to get some ideas for the body paragraphs.

The advantages of sharing information:

- It helps advance science and other fields.

- Sharing is cost- and time-effective

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The disadvantages of sharing information:

- Some information is sensitive (e.g. related to defence or national security)

- Some discoveries can be misused (e.g. to develop chemical/nuclear weapons)

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See if you can add some more points to each list. Use the internet (Google) to look for ideas. When you’ve done that, post the two lists. DO NOT write any paragraphs for now. Just post the two completed lists.

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