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These days and age, there is a problem, where the children should be taught at home or in school. Many people assume that the most effective way for a child's development is teaching at home but others consider that it is essential for children to study in school. This essay will discuss the advantages of both views. However, in my point of view, I prefer children going to school to teaching at home.

On the one hand, there are two good aspects in educating children at home: It can be flexible in time and the kids can study whenever they want and they can feel comfortable at home. Firstly, if the children are taught in their house, they don't have to get up early to study. Because there are no rules to force them to study in the morning or get up early for learning. For example, the children get up at 8am and they can start learning at 8.30am. In addition, the children can feel free and more comfortable to study when they are at home. Thus, the children will not be shy whether they want to ask something. Then, the children will feel comfortable to learn because that is their house, they can ask for a rest or play time without fear. Finally, these advantages will effectively help the child's development in a cozy way.

Nevertheless, the way of going to school is also a good environment for the children' development. First and foremost, when the kids go to school they can make a lot of new friends. Because in class, there are a lot of students and it can help the children enhance in communicating. For instance, there are many outdoor activities in school for kids to learn and play. The reason for that point is the school has a big playground and it will help the children develop their health. Lastly, it is really important for children to go to school due to the children can develop in a perfect way

In conclusion, both teaching children at home and children should be taught in school are effective ways. But in school they will have more activities to help them perfectly grow up and mature

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These days and age, there is a problem, There is some disagreement about where the children should be taught – at home or in school. Many people assume that the most effective way environment for a child's education and development is school, teaching at home but others consider that it is essential better for children to study at home. in school. This essay will discuss the advantages of both methods. views. However, in from my point of view, I prefer children going to school is the better option. to teaching at home.

On the one hand, there are two good aspects in educating children at home has certain benefits. First, it can be is flexible in terms of time, and the kids can study whenever they want and they can feel comfortable. [ 1] at home. Firstly, if the children are taught in their house, they don't have to get up early to study. Because there are no rules to force them to study in the morning or get up early for learning. For example, the children get up at 8am and they can start learning at 8.30am. In addition, the children can feel free and more comfortable to study when they are at home. Thus, the children will not be shy whether they want to ask something. Then, the children will feel comfortable to learn because that is their house, they can ask for a rest or play time without fear. Finally, these advantages will effectively help the child's development in a cozy way.

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[ 1]: That is just repetitious and useless. You need to present two or more other advantages. The same applies to your second body paragraph. Google “advantages of studying at home or in school” to get some ideas.

Also, take a look at my replies in the following threads to learn about essay structure.

https://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayAgreeDisagreeYoungEnjoyLife-Older/bjnlwx/post.htm

https://www.englishforums.com/English/CanAnyoneCheckEssay/bwpzmg/post.htm

Revise your essay and post below.