Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is undeniable that the younger generation should be encouraged to do voluntary jobs in their spare time, in particular community and themselves receive numerous well-being from this. However, I also think that not only adolescents, on the contrary, other individuals also need to attend for general work due to they are a part of society.

On the one hand, programs collective are a new procedure for upbringing teenagers. Moreover, these works even assist their career advancement. For instance, students might make new friends, and learn life experiences, or other skills from members when attending volunteer projects. Furthermore, working for the community play a vital role in contributing to social development, wealth gap, and connecting humans closer.

On the other hand, firstly, collective works rely on volunteers and equality, it means most mature persons and older people can participate as long as capable and healthy. In particular, Health experts recommend that helping others support the elderly mind frees mental anxiety and clears many negative thoughts. Second, some volunteer programs are geared towards developing relationships so that the younger and older generations have the opportunity to get to know each other better, people can share valuable lessons about life. In turn, the younger generation also expressed to the elderly their new perspective on modern life.


To summarize several points mentioned above, I believe that contributing to the establishment of society is the responsibility of each citizen. Regardless of age, people should positively participate in community activities depending on their condition.

Can you give me some advice for my essay? Thank you so much

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I have a final test in August and my target is 7.0 for task 2 . I'm not sure, I use the Cambridge dictionary to look up several words. In terms of content, I've read numerous newspapers every single day because my major is media and news.

Hi !

I have a final test in August and my target is 7.0 for task 2.

I'm not sure, I use the Cambridge dictionary to look up several words. In terms of content, I've read numerous newspapers every single day because my major is media and news. Can you give me some advice about my idea, grammarly? I wanna explain the essay in a shorter way .

Popcorn2111I have a final test in August

That gives you some breathing space, but it's not too far away. You need to put in some effort.

Popcorn2111and my target is 7.0 for task 2.

You need to practise writing a bit more to achieve that. In particular, you need to learn how to design and then structure your response.

Popcorn2111However, I also think that not only adolescents, on the contrary, other individuals also need to attend for general work due to they are a part of society.

That is outside the scope of this essay. The question clearly limits you to talking about teenagers only.


Your second body paragraph is also irrelevant. The best thing to do with such essay questions is to partially agree. That enables you to think of ideas on both sides.

For now, just think of any relevant ideas and put them in the following list (it's for your second body paragraph). Do not write full sentences. Just fill in the list in point form.


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