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There are many opinions that children should start learning the second language at primary school rather than secondary language. While I agree that sometimes this can have some drawbacks, I believe that this is more likely to have strong points.

On the one hand, learning a foreign language at primary school may spend time of children, instead of studying moral classes or taking part in sport activities. Many experts indicate that children should be developed morality and constitution to ensure that they can have good lives in the future. Moreover, if they join sport activities , they can have more chances to communicate with others and develop necessary soft skills.

However, I would argue that weaknesses are outweighed by benefits. Firstly, children who start learning a foreign language at primary school can pronounce better than who study later. Because if they study soon , they can be less affected by accent of mother tongue. Besides, approaching the second language soon can make children more confident when they meet foreigners. Because children at primary school feel more excited when taking part in foreign language classes with foreigners than at secondary school, communicating will be easier and more comfortable.

In conclusion, it seems to me that strengths of learning a foreign language are more significant than weak points

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There are many opinions that children should start learning a the second language different from their other tongue at primary school rather than secondary language. (wrong word) While I agree that sometimes this can have some drawbacks, I believe that this is more likely to have strong points.

On the one hand, learning a foreign language at primary school may spend time of children, (I do not understand your point. Children spend time playing, learning, eating and sleeping.) instead of studying moral (Do you mean classes about their religion, such as Hinduism or Buddhism?) classes or taking part in sport activities. Many experts indicate that children should be developed morality (wrong word) and constitution (wrong word) to ensure that they can have good lives in the future. (This is off-topic. The topic did not ask about religion and morals.) Moreover, if they join sport activities , (Off-topic. The subject is not about participating in sports.) they can have more chances to communicate with others and develop necessary soft skills.

However, I would argue that weaknesses are outweighed by benefits. Firstly, First, children who start learning a foreign language at primary school can pronounce its words better than those who study later. Because if they study soon , they can be less affected by the accent of their mother tongue. Besides, approaching (wrong word) the second another language soon can make children more confident when they meet foreigners. Because children at primary school feel more excited when taking part in foreign language classes with foreigners than children at secondary school, communicating will be easier and more comfortable.

In conclusion, it seems to me that strengths of learning a foreign language are more significant (Off-topic. The essay is not about the advantages and disadvantages of learning a foreign language. )than weak points