Hi It's me again, this is also another letter for job application which I respond through the advertising in newspaper. please have a look. Thankyou,

Dear: Ms. Caroline Dove,

I came across your job advertisement in Building Design and would like to apply for a position of Part 1 Architectural Assistant. I am particularly interested in your practice’s emphasis on urban regeneration and sustainable place making. I have enclosed my C.V. for your consideration.

Through my five years of studying architecture and design, I have developed good presentation skills and precision in detail design and the use materials. My experiences include designing small Jewish community theatre in Venice and urban regeneration project in Old Havana, which involved working with local community and exploring the alternative use of materials ranging from hand-crafted Terracotta bricks to pre-cast concretes. In addition to my degree in architecture I have also developed skills in customer service and team management while working in furniture department team at Habitat Ltd. With these qualities and strong belief in my abilities, I wish to become part of HTA Architect team.

Please kindly consider my application, I am looking forward to hearing from you and would welcome the opportunity to meet you and show my work.

Yours sincerely,
Dear Ms. Caroline Dove: [pay attention to the syntax]

I applying for a position of Part 1 Architectural Assistant. I have enclosed my C.V. for your consideration.

I am particularly interested in your practice’s emphasis on urban regeneration and sustainable place making. [anything else?]

Through five years of studying architecture and design, I have developed good presentation skills and precision in detail design and the use of materials. My experience include designing small Jewish community theatre in Venice and urban regeneration project in Old Havana, which involved working with local community and experimenting with new materials. In addition to my degree in architecture I have also developed skills in customer service and team management while working in furniture department team at Habitat Ltd. With my passion and enthusiam, knowledge, skills, and experience, I am confident that I will make a signficant positive contribution to the HTA Architect team.

Thank you for your kind consideration. I will contact you within two weeks.

Yours sincerely,
Try sustainable communities rather than sustainable place making. I work in the housing field in England and that is the phrase we use relating to regen projects.