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Nowadays, it is argued by a number of people that organizing global sporting competitions is beneficial for the nation, while some said that it will brings problematic for the society. In this essay, I will analyze on both sides of view.

On the one hand, there are several demerits for a country when hosting sports events. Firstly, organize global athletics will cost numerous money for a nation. For example, World Cup 2010 was held in South Africa is known for the most expensive in history with a cost of up to 33 billion VND. Specifically, host contry was built 5 stadium, an airport and many routes serve traffic. Moreover, many constructions will be wasted if not used anymore. For instance, after Olympic in China, construction of MT building has been abandoned until now. Sport centre is wild as the desert.

On the other hand, organizing global sports brings many merits for a country, First of all, it will attracts tourist all aroung the world. For instance, after the F1 season in Singapore, estimate about 100.000 audiences were at the staium to watch the F1. And from that, this sport event brings back more than 70 USD million for Singapre. In addition, hosting global sports helps social more modenized and creates many oppotunities for inhabitants. More specific, many buiding was build as well as ỉnfrastructured and road, the unemployment rate in that locality decreased. From there, it helps to develop country’s economy.

In conclusion, there are many dark sides of a country when organizing events soprts such as poor economy and waste of resources. In my opinion, it has bright sides from boosting nation’s economy and increse of tourism.

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Nowadays, it is argued by a number of people that organizing global sporting competitions is beneficial for [ 1] the a nation, while some said say that it will brings can be problematic in several ways. for the society. In this essay, [ 2] I will analyze on both sides of tend to agree with the former view.

On the one hand, there are several [ 3] demerits drawbacks for a country when hosting sports events. Firstly, [ 4] organizing global athletics competitions will costs [ 5] numerous substantial amounts of money. for a nation. For example, the 2010 World Cup 2010 was held in South Africa is known famous for being the most expensive in history with a cost of up to 33 billion VND. Specifically, the host country [ 6] was built [ 7] five [ 8] stadiums, an airport and many routes serve highways to facilitate traffic. Moreover, many of the new constructions will be are often wasted if and not used after the end of those events. anymore. For instance, after the [ 9] Olympics in China, construction of the MT building has been was abandoned, until now. and the sport centre is wild stands as half-finished skeleton. the desert.

On the other hand, organizing global sports events can bring many benefits merits for a country, First of all, it will attracts tourist from all [ 10] aroung around the world. For instance, after for the F1 season in Singapore, it is estimated that about [ 11] 100,000 [ 12] audiences fans were at the staium track to watch the racing. F1. And from that, this That sport event brings back brought in more than 70 USD million for Singapore. In addition, hosting global sports helps social more modenized and creates many job opportunities for locals. inhabitants. More specific, Typically, major sports events involve the construction of many new buildings, was build as well as other ỉnfrastructure, and road, which reduces the unemployment rate in that locality decreased. From there, it and helps to develop the country’s economy.

In conclusion, there are many [ 12] dark sides of a country when although organizing events sports [ 13] events can be expensive, such as poor economy and waste of resources. In my opinion, it has bright sides from it boosts tourism and the ing nation’s economy. and increse of tourism.

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[ 1]: We use “a” when we first mention something.

[ 2]: When the essay question asks for your opinion, you MUST state that opinion in the last sentence of the introduction.

[ 3]: Do not use “merits” or “demerits”.

[ 4]: “organize” is a verb. We need the noun form “organizing” (the verb in that sentence is “costs”).

[ 5]: “money” is not countable. We use “numerous” with countable nouns.

[ 6]: The passive there is wrong. It wasn’t the country that got built!

[ 7]: We tend to write out in words numbers ten and under.

[ 8]: The plural of “stadium” is “stadiums” or “stadia”.

[ 9]: “Olympic” is an adjective. The noun is “Olympics” or “Olympic Games”.

[ 10]: Pay attention to your spelling. ALWAYS go over your work before submitting it.

[ 11]: We use a comma (not a full stop) as the thousands separator. We use a full stop (not a comma) as the decimal marker.

[ 12]: “dark side” has a special meaning.

[ 13]: In the conclusion, just write a sentence or two to summarize the main points from the body paragraphs.

Finally, I think you should read more in order to improve your writing skills. You might want to start with the following websites. Replace the dots with www.

.learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/skills/reading

....sciencejournalforkids.org/

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