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In this day and age, environment has been at the forefront of public attention. Some people think that the loss of various species of flora and fauna is the main reason of environmental problem of our time while others claim the opposite. From my point of view, I agree with the idea which is said that there are more important environmental problems. This essay will highlight both these views and my opinion dramatically.


On the one hand, a reason why some people approve that losing of particular species of plants as well as animals is the main issue leading to lose diversity of ecology and the balance in nature. For example, people have cut down trees to build their house. This action happening a lot make the number of different species of plants reduce and animals do not have place to live or find food to eat. As a result, a number of flora and fauna stand a risk of extinction such as fox or tiger in animals and a few woods in plant.


On the other hand, a number of citizens believe that there are more important problems of the environment such as global warming or greenhouse effect. These issues affect human's life badly. To illustrate, there are more than 5 thousand people died all around the world due to natural disasters every year and some lands disappear because of erosion or under the water.


From my viewpoint, there are numerous harmful effects human from environment while the loss of particular species of plants and animals does not affect people badly.


In conclusion, protecting and reducing the risk of extinction of fauna and flora is significant matter thought we also find and focus on another problems about environment which harm on our life.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion


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In this day and age, The environment has been at the forefront of public attention. (That is not the topic. Do not open your essay with "debate," "controversy", "public attention" or similar phrases. The instructions are to give your opinion on a topic. ) Some people think that the loss of various species of flora and fauna is the main reason of environmental problem of our time while others claim the opposite. (The opposite of "loss" is "gain". Do you mean that it is a major problem to gain new species, that is, for new species to evolve from old ones?) From my point of view, (Agree is a point of view. This is a redundant phrase.) I agree with the idea which is said (ungrammatical. Delete these words) that there are more important environmental problems, and the worst of these is the impact of global warming.. This essay will highlight both these views and my opinion dramatically.

(Never mention your essay. The examiner knows you are writing on the topic. Just give them a hint of your main answer. I gave you a good remedy in the bold red text.)

On the one hand, a one reason why some people approve ("Approve" means that they think it is very good and positive. Is it very good to lose species?) that losing of particular species of plants as well as animals is the main issue leading to lose less biodiversity of ecology and upsetting the balance in nature. For example, people have cut down trees to build their house. This action happening a lot make the number of different species of plants reduce (ungrammatical English. ) and animals do not have place to live or find food to eat. As a result, a number of many species of flora and fauna stand a risk of extinction such as foxes and tigers. fox or tiger in animals and a few woods in plant.


On the other hand, a number of citizens believe that there are more important problems of the environment such as global warming or greenhouse effect. (Incorrect science. The greenhouse effect is a property of certain gasses to retain heat. A property of water is that it freezes at 0 degrees centigrade and boils at 100 degrees centigrade. Properties of natural elements do not cause environmental problems. The cause of the problem is when very large amounts of these greenhouse gasses are released into the atmosphere. Since thee gasses have the property of retaining heat, the earth grows warmer.) These issues affect human's life our lives badly. To illustrate this, there are more than 5 five thousand people (That is not very many. Several millions died from the pandemic in 2020 and more than 50 million die each year from diseases and lack of medical facilities.) died die all around the world due to natural disasters every year and some lands disappear because of erosion or flooding. under the water.

(Do not write tow summary paragraphs. Write one which restates your opinion.)

In conclusion, from my viewpoint, there are numerous harmful effects human from environment problems causing harm to people, while the loss of particular species of plants and animals does not affect people badly.


In conclusion, protecting and reducing the risk of extinction of fauna and flora is significant matter thought we also find and focus on another problems about environment which harm on our life.