Hello Everybody! Could you please read over and correct my letter of application and resume? I would like to go to USA for an internship. Did you find this application letter interesting?

What I could do else to make these better?

Thank you in advance for your attention to my post, your help and constructive critic.

Maria

MY LETTER OF APPLICATION:
Dear Ms. X:
I am writing to express my interest in the 12 to 18 month internship with [company name]. I learned about this opportunity while viewing the [company name] web page. I believe I have the background and qualifications you are seeking in an intern.

I have gained practical experience and developed horsemanship skills working with horses at ‘Horse Training Center’ in CITY (COUNTRY), specialized in young animals training, mostly trotters, many of which are very famous now. The leader and the owner of the place is a veterinarian, equine practitioner. I have learned about health care of horses both from him and through my private interest. I have also gain hands-on experience taking care of and training private horses from stables around my city since I started university. I have also taken a part in some dressage competitions on horses trained by me with really good results.

During the course of my PhD studies I have obtained essential practical experience as a scientist as well as a team worker. I am a good observer and very patient and a quick learner. Probable these attributes of my character allowed me to be a good listener, have excellent relationships with people and superb communication skills.

Also, I love working with young or difficult horses. Clear progress of their ability to match requirements gives me satisfaction and is the most rewarding part of my work. I am confident that I can be an active, open-minded and useful member of your team. I believe the combination of my academic background and practical horse handling experience will help me to contribute to the ongoing success of your company during my internship.

I look forward to hearing from you.

MY RESUME:
Objective

Willing to increase knowledge in equine exercise physiology, gain experience in horse nutrition working side by side with top equine nutritionists. To become a competent researcher, acquainted with different laboratory and research methods.

Skills And Accomplishments:
· Experienced in horse healthcare ranging from preventative to clinical care.
· Competent rider and trainer of horses.
· Widely recognized as an excellent horse care provider.
· Detail oriented and resourceful in the completion of tasks with ability to multi-task effectively.
· Effective independently or as a member of the team to reach objectives.
· Dedicated individual achieving a reputation for consistently going beyond what is required.
· Excellent interpersonal and communication skills.
· Proficient in programs of Microsoft Office.

Work Experience
· Lecturer Assistant
October 2003– June 2006
Faculty of Natural Science, Department of Biochemistry and Physiology.University of CITY, CITY, COUNTRY.
Demonstrated outstanding ability to organize, manage and supervise coordinate work in laboratory. Exhibited capability to work both independently and as a team. Presented effective communication skills with a wide range of personalities.

· Veterinary Assistant (voluntary work), Caretaker and Horse Trainer
June - October 2005
Horse Training Center, CITY, COUNTRY.

Demonstrated knowledge of technical competencies such as collecting and processing of blood samples and preparation for and assistance in surgeries. Under veterinary supervision injected animals with required medicines and immunizations. Maintained stalls clean, fed and watered animals. Provided excellent horse care and riding skills.

· Lecturer in Public Health
September 2004 – June 2005
1st Non-Public Medical College in CITY, CITY, COUNTRY.
Thrived on working with people and helping students achieve their objectives.

· Lifeguard
Summer job: 2002, 2003, 2004, 2006
COMPANY, CITY, STATE, USA.
Presented strong work ethic and high quality performance. Confirmed very good customer and co-worker relations and communication skills.

Education

· PhD student
2003 – Present
Faculty of Natural Science, Department of Physiology. University of CITY, CITY, COUNTRY.

· Master of Science (Biochemistry)
2003
Faculty of Natural Science, Department of Physiology. University of CITY, CITY, COUNTRY.
Majors: biochemistry, physiology, microbiology, genetics and cellular biology.

Publications
· LastName Initial., Year. Title of the article. Journal Name, Pages.
· LastName Initial., Year. Title of the article. Journal Name, Pages.

Personal details

My hobbies include studying, horse-riding and fencing. I am well versed with Word, Excel, PowerPoint.
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Hi,

I am a little bit sad that no one wants to make comments on or help me to improve my application letter and resume. Kindly please, take a look and correct them if needed. Thank you very much in advance.

Maria
Dear Ms. X:
I am writing to express my interest in the 12 to 18 month internship with [company name]. I learned about this opportunity while viewing the [company name] web page. I believe I have the background and qualifications you are seeking in an intern.

I have gained practical experience and developed horsemanship skills working with horses[not necessary as you have said horsemanship skills] at ‘Horse Training Center’ in CITY (COUNTRY), specializing in training young animals , mostly trotters, many of which are now very famous. The leader and the owner of the Center is a veterinarian, specialising in equine practice. I have learned about health care of horses both from him and through my private personal interest in the care of horses. Since I started university, I have also gained hands-on experience taking care of and training private horses from stables around my city . I have also taken a part in some dressage competitions on horses trained by me with really good results.

During the course of my PhD studies I have obtained essential practical experience as a scientist as well as a team worker. I am a good observer, and very patient and a quick learner. Probably these attributes of my character allowed me to be a good listener, have excellent relationships with people and superb communication skills.

Also, I love working with young or difficult horses. Clear progress of their ability to match requirements gives me satisfaction and is the most rewarding part of my work. I am confident that I can be an active, open-minded and useful member of your team. I believe the combination of my academic background and practical horse-handling experience will help me to contribute to the ongoing success of your company during my internship.

I look forward to hearing from you.

MY RESUME:
Objective

Willing To increase my knowledge of equine exercise physiology, gain experience in horse nutrition by working side by side with top equine nutritionists, and become a competent researcher, acquainted with different laboratory and research methods.

Skills And Accomplishments:
· Experienced in horse healthcare ranging from preventative to clinical care.
· Competent rider and trainer of horses.
· Widely recognized as an excellent horse-care provider.
· Detail-oriented and resourceful in the completion of tasks with ability to multi-task effectively.
· Effective independently or as a member of a team to reach objectives.
· Dedicated individual achieving with a reputation for consistently going beyond what is required.
· Excellent interpersonal and communication skills.
· Proficient in programs of Microsoft Office.

Work Experience
· Lecturer Assistant
October 2003– June 2006
Faculty of Natural Science, Department of Biochemistry and Physiology.University of CITY, CITY, COUNTRY.
Demonstrated outstanding ability to organize, manage and supervise coordinate work in laboratory. Exhibited capability the capacity to work both independently and as part of a team. Presented effective communication skills with a wide range of personalities.

· Veterinary Assistant (voluntary work), Caretaker and Horse Trainer
June - October 2005
Horse Training Center, CITY, COUNTRY.

Demonstrated knowledge of technical competencies such as collecting and processing of blood samples and preparation for and assistance in surgery. Under veterinary supervision injected animals with required medicines and immunizations. Maintained stalls clean, fed and watered animals. Provided excellent horse care and riding skills.

· Lecturer in Public Health
September 2004 – June 2005
1st Non-Public Medical College in CITY, CITY, COUNTRY.
Thrived on working with people and helping students achieve their objectives.

· Lifeguard
Summer job: 2002, 2003, 2004, 2006
COMPANY, CITY, STATE, USA.
Presented strong work ethic and high quality performance. Confirmed as having very good customer and co-worker relations and communication skills.

Education

· PhD student
2003 – Present
Faculty of Natural Science, Department of Physiology. University of CITY, CITY, COUNTRY.

· Master of Science (Biochemistry)
2003
Faculty of Natural Science, Department of Physiology. University of CITY, CITY, COUNTRY.
Majors: biochemistry, physiology, microbiology, genetics and cellular biology.

Publications
· LastName Initial., Year. Title of the article. Journal Name, Pages.
· LastName Initial., Year. Title of the article. Journal Name, Pages.

Personal details

My hobbies include studying, horse-riding and fencing. I am well versed with Word, Excel, PowerPoint.
Hi!

I am sorry but I did not check on my letters for many days, so I did not know that I have reply from you.

Thank you very much for your time to correct my mistakes and attention to this letters.

With best wishes,
Maria
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