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-Is "build on giving" grammatically written correctly?

The world is a wheel and built on giving.



Every Shabbat there is one place where hundreds of Israelis and Jews gather together and accept Shabbat.

gather together/accept the tense here is correct to use?

At or in?

Shabbat at Yaniv's, At/in los angeles, city of Angeles.

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PalabraThe world is a wheel and built on giving.

This is OK in my view.

PalabraEvery Shabbat there is one place where hundreds of Israelis and Jews gather together and accept Shabbat.

The tenses are correct, but what do you mean by "accept" Shabbat?

PalabraShabbat at Yaniv's, At/in los angeles, city of Angeles.

Shabbat at Yaniv's, in Los Angeles, City of Angels.