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In the present time, the animals are on the edge of extinction and be become the target for hunting purpose. To preserve and protect them from that issue, people have constructed many zoos around the world. However, there are some people have an opposite point of views. They belive that zoos are cruel and should not be opened. In this essay, I will give some comments to both perspectives.


First, people think that zoos catch and lock the animals in the cages and do not look after them carefully. Moreover, in the world, there are many group of circus abuse the animals to work for them. They torture and make the animals obey them. For example, the elephants and the monkeys have been torture for many years and they too fear to fight back when the tamers hit or threat them.


On the other hand, there are still positive aspects such as conserve and protect them from the extinction and hunters. Furthermore, zoos gives the animals a shelter to keep them safe from hunting. In addtion, the zoos prevent them from the extinction because they will set the couple of species into one cage and they can sleep together to create an offspring.

There always have both advantages and disadventags in every issues also the zoos. As mention above the zoos may be the factor cause harm to animals otherwise it also bring them a home or a shelter to protect them from any threat. To make a decision whether zoos good or bad, it depends on the way people treat the animal.

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Topic: Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion. Give all the instructions.

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On the one hand, zoos were created to give wild animals a place to live and reproduce. However, there's a dark side of the medal as well. Some zoos torture animals (like, for instance, they did with an elephant who was put in a current-carrying case). Others may stave animals and so on. It depends on the people only, some of them are good and caring, while others are cruel. I think that the perfect option for such animals is to let them live in wild nature or reservations that are close to their natural habitat.

rachelhumphreysHowever, there's a dark side of the medal as well.

This doesn't make sense. You could say that there is a dark side to them.

rachelhumphreys(like, for instance, they did with an elephant who was put in a current-carrying case).

The last word should be cage.

rachelhumphreysOthers may stave animals

starve

rachelhumphreysis to let them live in wild nature

is to let them live wild

rachelhumphreysor reservations that are close to their natural habitat.

or in reserves. Reserves is the normal word in this context. You also omitted in.

rachelhumphreysOn the one hand, zoos

On the one hand, Zoos were created to give wild animals a place to live and reproduce. However, there's they have a dark side of the medal as well. Some zoos torture animals. (like, f For instance, they did with zookeepers put an elephant in a very confining pen. who was put in a current-carrying case). Others may stave animals and so on. It depends on the people managing the zoo; only, some of them are good and caring, while others are cruel. I think that the perfect option for such animals is to let them live in the wild nature or in reservations that are close to their natural habitat.

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