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'Disney Fine Jewelry' a work of art, created by master craftsmen, especially for the woman of today.

I want to tell it's for women specially so how can we rephrase the above sentences? In second sentence rather than wqoman of today i want it for design concious or fashion concious something on that lines
Kinldy help me

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You have to be very careful to avoid sounding patronising to women:

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For any woman whose look is stylish, "Disney Fine Jewelry" is the obvious choice - works of art created by master craftsmen.
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For the woman who wants to look stylish ..........................................
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First line I modified to

We are pleased to offer our patrons specially for woman, an exclusive preview of our Limited Edition

Second line i modified to
'Disney Fine Jewelry' a work of art, created by master craftsmen, especially for those fashion-conscious women who desire to look more stylish and classy
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