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Hi teachers. I wrote this.

(We're in a bar restroom)

Dale finished taking a ***, then went to the sink and stared drunkenly at himself in the mirror.


If I want to mention that Dale is drunk without just writing 'He's drunk', is the way I have done it with 'drunkenly' okay to you or do you not like it?

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anonymousIf I want to mention that Dale is drunk without just writing 'He's drunk', is the way I have done it with 'drunkenly' okay to you or do you not like it?

I love it.