Hi, I am applying to a school for human resource management. This is my second masters. Please check if it looks good. Please feel free to edit. Thanks

Statement of Purpose

Pursuing a masters is a dream, a goal and often a path to a future career. For me, it is also a responsibility that I owe to myself and a commitment I have to others.

I have realized in the today's world that originality is often sacrificed for time and money. I want to fully explore the body of knowledge of human resources, fully expand on the insights that it provides and get my career started. Choosing human resource management as a career would help launch my career with a decent job, which involves interacting with people. I like to communicate with people, act like a mediator, ,solve their problems whether it may relate to hiring and recruiting or dealing with employees. I would like to oversee the business of managing people in an organization.

Basically, I am a Business Administration major. Majority of my coursework included fundamentals of human resource management, marketing, organizing which further inspires me to enhance my ablitilities in HRM. Human resource management was one of my favorite subjects. It is this liking for the subject, that inclines me to pursue a degree in HRM. Moreover, It is highly in demand in today’s modern and competitive world. As a human resource professional has become important part of sucessful company with a a wide variety of responsibilities, I would consider myself fortunate enough, if I get to become a part of the team. Additionally, I strongly believe teamwork. I choose human resource management because the current need of the present and the future depends on the placements of human resources in the right direction.Your program with its flexibility and strength of curriculum and coursework would allow me to further my understanding in this interdisciplinary approach to these complex human resources issues that people face daily in their work environment. I am confident I can enhance the scholarly debate in the discipline of conflict resolution. In addition, I am a major proponent of teamwork and will prove to be a great team player within your program as I regard learning as both an individual and team process.Finally, why do I request that you consider me for admission to your program? First, I am a devout learner. I can handle the rigors of advanced academic study.

I love to bring the excitement of life and topics to others. Secondly, I believe deeply in research and the information that it uncovers.

. Although my past education is in business, I desire to deepen these skills, and to use the material that I learn.

I realize it is tough for a returning student; however, I do not believe in quitting. Lastly, I always want to succeed. Success here is twofold. First, it is personal success for me in the program.

Next, it is my commitment to give you my very best, by learning human resource theory and taking it to the classroom and beyond. If I am accepted, you will not be disappointed.

You will find me to be a committed and capable student and an enthusiastic advocate of human.

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thats actaully a good job mate . . i am applying for the same course in canada . . hope you dont mind if i copy some of that material . .
regards
sUn R.
Its a nice SOP...explaining your vision. I really liked it.

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I think your statement will read better if you tie the various issues together. e.g. You said this is a responsibility to yourself and a commitment to others. Could you elaborate on that?

You have mentioned your coursework. Could you explain in detail why you fall in love with HRM? What's your experience in the area?

Be sure to bring up no more than one point per paragraph.

Hello,

Anonymous!

This is Jigisha.

I have update SOP here.

Personnel Statement

The pursuit of satisfying and meaningful career is my ultimate goal and a postgraduate degree is an important stepping stone along the path to a future career. For me, it is also a responsibility that I owe to myself and a commitment I have to others.

I have realized in the today's world that originality is often sacrificed for time and money.

I want to fully explore the body of knowledge of human resources, fully expand on the insights that it provides and launch my career into a new phase. Choosing human resource management as a career path will advance my prospects immensely. My interest in human resource management, centres on the fact that it involves extensive interaction with people from all walks of life. I like to communicate with people, act like a mediator and solve their problems; whether it relates to hiring and recruiting or dealing with employees. Ultimately, I would like to oversee the business of managing people in an organization.

I have chosen this course because it seems tailored to my competencies. I understand that this Masters in Management program is ranked amongst the top programs of this kind across the globe, a generalist program with special focus on the International aspects of business and management, designed to meet the changing needs of today's global companies.

Academically, I have a Bachelor of Commerce major. Some of the subjects that I undertook during my degree include : Fundamentals of Human Resource Management, Marketing, and Organizing; which further inspires me to enhance my abilities in Human Resource Management. Human Resource Management is my favourite subject area and, it is the passion that I have for this area that has convinced me to pursue this degree. Specialists in Human Resource Management are in high demand in today's modern and competitive world; as the human resource professional has become an important part of successful company. Human resource managers have a wide variety of responsibilities and I really look forward to the day that I get to become a part of a human resources team in a major company.

I have chosen human resource management because the current needs of companies both now and in the future will depends on the placements of human resources in the right direction. The program offered by your institution, with its flexibility, strength of curriculum and coursework; would allow me to further my understanding of this interdisciplinary approach to these complex human resources issues, that people face daily in their work environment. I am confident I can enhance the scholarly debate in the discipline of conflict resolution. I am a strong advocate of teamwork and I will prove to be a great team player within your program as I regard learning as both an Individual and team process.

Finally, why do I request that you consider me for admission to your program? Primarily because I am a devout learner. I have demonstrated that I can handle the rigors of advanced academic study.

I have also worked in a Human Resource domain, and this accelerates me into the top league. This program is an excellent fit for what I have been interested in throughout my career. It offers a nice mix of short-term and long-term activities. My short term achievements keep me cranked up and the longterm accomplishments gear me for the ever changing future.

I have completed my Bachelor of Commerce and a Post Graduate course in Human Resource Management from The Maharaja Sayajirao University of Baroda, since than I have been working with Reliable Infosys Pvt. Ltd; untill now. My work involves: Recruitment, Training, Coaching and Employee Relations.

I love to bring the excitement of life and topics to others. I believe deeply in research and the information that it uncovers.

Although my past education is in Commerce, I have a desire to deepen these skills, and to use the material that I have learned. I realize it can be tough for a returning student, however I do not believe in quitting, I have always wanted to succeed, and pushed myself to my personal goals. Success here is twofold. First, it is personal success for me in the program. Next, it is my commitment to give you my very best, by learning human resource theory and taking it to the classroom and beyond. If I am accepted, you wll not be disappointed, you will find me to be a committed and a capable student.

Cheers,

Jigisha
Nice work man, Thanks a lot
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people please do check my statement of purpose and tell me how it is.....

The knowledge acquired in schools and colleges, I believe is not an education, but the means to it. It is this belief that makes me ‘a student to the end of my days’: the obvious direction being curiosity towards exploration.
Ever since I remember, machines were always fascinating for me. Even now I dismantle machines trying to figure out what actually is going on inside. This inquisitiveness and love for machines made me choose mechanical for my Undergraduate studies. I was able to cherish my dream of getting into the stream of Mechanical Engineering in a reputed institution. I am proud to say that I studied in one of the best colleges in the state. Having now graduated in Mechanical Engineering, I have reached a stage in my life where I wish to pursue further my education.
As a school student I have been an avid follower of Formula Racing Events and had a significant collection of automobile related books and magazines that kept me up to date on the latest developments in automotive technology. The passion for automobiles was always in me. As my undergraduate studies progressed, I gained exposure to a variety of aspects and my interest increased steadfastly on automotive engineering. I realized that automotive engineering is one of the most challenging and engaging careers. As part of my academic training in the final year, I undertook projects that tested my fundamentals and applied skills. All through my academic program, I had the desire to work on automobiles and wanted to bring in ideas that were atypical.
Under the guidance of my mentor and Head of Mechanical department, I decided to carry out a group project on a skill that most of the drivers find hard to learn, Parallel Car Parking. Parallel car parking is a method of parking the car in line with other parked cars. Cars parked in parallel are in one line, parallel to the curb, with the front bumper of each car facing the rear bumper of the adjacent one. The car designed for the project possesses wheels that rotate 360- degrees; hence one need not struggle while parking the car. The car is run by the use of solar panels that generates power when the car moves on sunlight. This concept offers incredible packaging characteristics, high distribution of torque. The car is run by the use of electric motor; 2 for each wheel. The car is basically stopped parallel to the space where it is to be parked, then the wheels are made to rotate in 180 degrees and the vehicle can be parked in the required space. This being a group project, there were many situations where the opinions would defer amongst the group but they were sorted out. These situations helped me to develop myself into an understanding leader and a team player. The project helped me to understand various technical concepts. The project was a grand success and was nominated as one among the top three projects.
After this I was more than ever determined as I felt a burning desire to attain the highest level of education and transcend new scope for research in Automobile Engineering. To satisfy my curiosity and to fulfill my ambitions I have decided to pursue a masters program in Automobile engineering. Since I wish to be well acquainted with various mechanical softwares like CATIA V5, Unigraphics-NX, etc I am presently attending various coaching classes to master them.
Being a prospective student for new challenging ideas, I believe that an opportunity for higher education in U.K. will be a unique chance to test and prove my ability and also to enhance and broaden my knowledge with transition to a new setting. Finally, I would like to add here that my parents have always been a source of inspiration to me. They have set personal examples and ideals for me. As a result of this, I believe that over the years, I have evolved into a person who can fit easily into a team and who appreciates the value of discussion and exchanges of ideas. I am largely self-regulated and am capable of independent work, given an opportunity.
I would like to conclude with the reasons for me choosing to apply to your esteemed university for my Master degree. I strongly feel that Masters in Automobile Engineering program from your University is a highly structured program because it provides the right balance between theory and Research. It would give me ample opportunities to apply my knowledge in research related platforms and test it on real world problems.
Post master's, I would like to work with a research and development team and aid in contributing towards advancement of technology. It is against this backdrop that I would earnestly implore you to consider my candidature, hoping that you would provide me an opportunity to be a part of your esteemed institution.
I have used part of your nice work, hope you won't mind! regards

Hello I need your help for my statement of purpose. Minimum 500 words in length.


Statement of Purpose

Florida International University MS in Human Resource Management


[Describe your professional goals] I am Marianne Morillo-Owens and am interested in applying for MS in Human Resource Management. Pursuing a masters is a dream for this program is a step towards my future career as a professional in Human Resource Management. I want to fully explore the body of knowledge of human resources and help launch my career with a job, which involves helping with people.


[Interest in HR] Basically, I took Human Resource Management and Human Resource Development courses at Rochester Institute of Technology that I could understand the whole scenarios, job satisfactions, developing people and retaining people is the major challenge that I like to take these challenges to analyze the problem. HR gives my knowledge about HR how that would fit my skills such as the good teamwork, good relationship with people, communication skills, computer skills, analytical skills and time management. My passion wants to become Human Resource that HR may be right for me for some reasons. First, I love working with people that I like to help people grow their new opportunity, new experiences and new skills to success for the organization. Second, the strategic planning is important for employees should know and prepare that I can make better strategic planning for benefit plans, global workplace environments, labor relations and employees equity opportunities on basic of HR laws. Then, I want to see how organizational development success for employee’s satisfaction what they need. I like to operate how HR management consult with top management on the organization’s employee development, strategic planning, hiring, recruiting, training, compensation, and benefits.


[Reasons for pursuing this degree at FIU] This program is an excellent fit for what I have been interested in throughout my career. HR inspires me to enhance my abilities in Human Resources Management. Human Resource Management is my favorite subject area and it is the passion that I have for this area that has convinced me to pursue this degree I have a several reasons to choose this degree as a career because I am always eager to share my knowledge and experiences on various topics related to the HR. Working in HR can sometime challenge but it can also be immensely rewarding that I show some caring about employees what they need to satisfy with their jobs. HR is my passion where my dream wants to come true that I feel this career is one of my dream job. I love to help with the development of other employees that enhance their skills and give them satisfaction what they are needed. I love studying data, understanding how the economy and political factors into HR strategies, and how technology continues to impact HR strategies and solutions. It’s very fascinating, growing, very important part of business and more technology in the workplace, HR strategies have become challenging issues like engagement, reskilling, digital leadership, and organizational redesign. For reason, I want to learn more about HR that it helps me preparing my future career and grow my knowledge and gain valuable skills in any industry. Therefore, HR is my dream job where I want to become succeed or failure no matter what I am not giving up on my dream career. It is my commitment to give you my very best, by learning human resource theory.


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