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The security guard comes back to the monitors. The camera feed from the prison yard still shows no activity.

- Is this the correct word order?

- Is it an awkward way to write it?

Thanks.

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anonymous

The security guard comes back to the monitors. The camera feed from the prison yard still shows no activity.

- Is this the correct word order? Yes.

- Is it an awkward way to write it? No.

Thanks.

CJ