Hey gius, could you check it, please? Hi Vlad, I would like to tell you about a girl I met three days ago in the Basket-Hall. Her name is Julia and she is so cute. She was working...
I have written an introduction of a short story, and I really need your opinions about it. Thank you in advance. The place where I live now does not really reflect it state in...
Hello, nice to meet you everyone. I am GuGu from Myanmar, Burma. I am 16 years old. So, I am a high school student now. This time, I want to share the high school...
Hi there i have written a very short story. I would really appreciate if you take the time to suggest me better sentences or point any grammatical mistakes. Jhon was asked...
I once had a dream in which I stood alongside a tall black wall from which many moans echoed. Crevices created a route for me to climb and look inside the deep pit. I will tell...
It was a hot, sunny afternoon. Capitan Jon Snow was sitting on a beautiful, sandy beach. Just a couple hours before his ship had sank all his crew has died and his life’s work...
hi, im a student and would like to have someone to check this text and help me to make it better. Thank you My husband is Armin Helisch, and he was born 19. Dezember 1984 in...
Hello, I just wrote my first script for my play writing class. Could anyone help me with it? Its all done, but still a rough draft. Can anyone help with making the diolouge sound...
hello my name is Huan,i come from Viet Nam,i bad at english,i want to improve my english,i verry happy if i was helped by you.
Creative Essay No editing or proof reads, just another being's personal thoughts? Life “To live is the rarest thing in the world, most people exist, and that is all”, I start...
If students need to improve their English skills, there is no better solution than to learn English abroad in an English speaking country. Imagine, they'll be immersed...
hey every one .. i have a debate next week and its my exam .. i choose the topic ( What job would you like to do and why ? ) could you friend help me how to begin this debate...
Somehow after Bodega’s death everyone knew what Nazario and Veronica did. Julio was traumatized after Willie’s death; he started hearing voices as if bodega wanted Julio to continue...
I was in grade 6 th when this incident happened to me. My father had hired a van for our school picks and drops. Our van used to come to collect us very late. One day my friend...
When I was in 3 rd grade Dollar fountain pen was newly introduced in markets. Like others I, too, was desirous to have one. Mahreen, one of my classmates, gave me her Dollar fountain...
Dalim Begum is a president of “Nadi Mohila Unnoyon Dal” (Woman Development Group) of Choto Kanua under Bhandaria ADP. Though she is the president of a group, financial condition...
When I newly joined English forum I made a tour to the forum to explore it more. For the purpose I opened the page “General guidelines” and started reading it. Each rule that...
I am in year 12 and am writing story where i am subverting the genres of crime fiction. My plan is to narrate the story from the criminals perspective. He is already in the detectives...
I know my fiction is lenghty and boring. But please read it and guide me to write a better and interesting story. Thanks Dark Aspect. I hate my father’s occupation. He is...
I have just read an amazing story, that inspired me to face my life. I tried to translate it for u all, with some modification. I hope some one will read id and give a comment...
Hello, I wrote this story and I've been told that it had some verb tenses wrong. I did my best to try and correct them all, but if someone can find more, please point them out...
Hello, I am dutch and I have to do a presentation in front of my class. I've just finished writing my presentation and I'd like to ask you to check it and tell me wether I did...
In many countries childern works for paid work, many people says it is not desirable to allow them working at this kind of works wheres the other says it is good for them to gain...
Hi, it’s my first post and story here, and first story in english so please be understanding. I’t was a day like all common, routine and dull day at school, even so John...
Hi all, my name is Bowen I'm trying to improve my English. Please help me correct my grammar & vocabulary. Million Thanks! Mr.Mickey was a small mouse, he felt that he was too...