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Check Grammar?

My name was Ngan, who was a Vietnamese girl in our scenario. My boyfriend was Ahem, who comes from India. We knew each other via Facebook. A month later, I invited him to come...

A Lesson (A True Story)

(This is a true story happened in my childhood and had changed my way of thinking. Please read it may be it helps you in any way and tell me if you find any mistake. And you surely...

Dangerous Scheme

(I was a simpleton in my childhood. Here comes the conclusive prove.) Once, when I was in 3 rd grade, Zaba, my classmate, gave me some money and said to me ”keep...

A Story Of Lazy People

Hello all, please check this story. Long ago in a faraway land, there was a kingdom whose ruler was sad. The king of the land thought his people were lazy. The king pondered...

Real Life By Mooyong Part 1

04/09/2010 “Last year is not my year but this year is my year” one word of former Thai prime minister said before the res-shirt violence had occurred in Bangkok. Yesterday...

Please Tell Me What Is Right Form?

What is the difference between these two sentences? They were brought up in New YORK. OR They lived in New York. ...

I Have Written A Story. Please Check It...

Jimmy wells and Bob were fast friend. They lived in New York. Jimmy was 20 year old and Bob was 18 year old. Jimmy was honest and dutiful. He did not want to leave New York....

Any Ideas For A Big Plot Twist?

I'm writing on a story, and I've kind of lost my mind over it. I'm already on page 43, and the only super big thing that happened in that the main protagonist, Morgan, realized...

Story Criticism?

Hello everyone, I hope all of you are having a nice day. In here I wanted to share a story that I wrote. As you see, I need criticism for this story before going further. A little...

Vwin Ghaziabad Where I Learnt Speaking...

Daer friends, Thanks a lot to English forum where Ican express my gratitude for vwin spoken english and personality development course. I learnt many things of english besides...

My Small Project

Hey Could someone check this? I'd be very greatful My small project Why are there Chinese characters in the Japanese language? Nathalie Bartelius Introduction...

I Wrote A Small Story. Everyone Please...

I wrote this short story just days back. No one has commented on it yet. Please anyone with time to spare, do comment on the story with most critical judgment. Any help would be...

Amazing Stories For Kids

It seems that with technological advances scenes fathers or mothers read online bedtime stories (Link removed by moderator. You can put links to your website in your profile)...

Can You Review My First Chapter For An...

PAPA Captain Fred took out his laser beam and pointed it at Troy. “Say goodbye to Zarco,” he said with a confident smile. “Never!” Yelled out Troy. He too took out his laser beam...

The Ant And The Cricket

The Ant and the Cricket - Part 1 :: Ancient Relationships Yo! I read the poem " The ant and the cricket " and I got this cool Idea! I converted the story into a book and added...

Snow Is Melting.

Hi guys, please help me in finding the mistakes I made in my essay . It's an assignment about snow melting . Notes : 1. Write 100-120 word. 2. The title is snow is melting. 3...

Please Read Our Short Story And Tell Your...

Please help us! Do you feel something strange in this text or everything is ok for english reader? The Brave Eaglet 1. Once upon a time a loving couple of eagles built a nest...

Are These Opening Paragraphs Any Good...

Peter Buxton had just turned thirteen. He was quite tall for his age and well-built. He had short blond hair and blue eyes. This morning he was wearing a clean white shirt...

How Does This Read?

This is part of my story. As a non native English speaker, I hope it reads well, but if it doesn't, I would be grateful if you could help me improve. Thank you. Stealia and her...

The Little Girl And Her Fear

Hello. I'm glad to share my short story with you Hope you enjoy it! And please be mercyful with my (lot of) english errors. I'm still trying to perfect myself but i believe i have...

Is It Interesting?

Hi! I would like to know if this short story is interesting and especially meaningful? Closed Ears « We shall carry on with The Ugly Truth ‘ guest ;Mike after taking a short...

How I Met Julia

Hey gius, could you check it, please? Hi Vlad, I would like to tell you about a girl I met three days ago in the Basket-Hall. Her name is Julia and she is so cute. She was working...

Story?

I have written an introduction of a short story, and I really need your opinions about it. Thank you in advance. The place where I live now does not really reflect it state in...

High School Student's Live In Myanmar...

Hello, nice to meet you everyone. I am GuGu from Myanmar, Burma. I am 16 years old. So, I am a high school student now. This time, I want to share the high school...

Short Short Story?

Hi there i have written a very short story. I would really appreciate if you take the time to suggest me better sentences or point any grammatical mistakes. Jhon was asked...
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