Last week, I finally got along with Jim. We really had in common--We love video games. Today I'm going to have him down to a primitive building in wales to find out, if there...
Hello all, please check this story. Long ago in a faraway land, there was a kingdom whose ruler was sad. The king of the land thought his people were lazy. The king pondered...
My Surprise Trip My mom told me that we were going somewhere for my 9 th birthday I asked her where we were going and she told me it was a surprise. I...
Hi, I'm Russian, so English is not my first language. I have written a big novel - it's a real story from my life that happened to me when I was 20 years old. Of course, originally...
Hi, I'm Russian, so English is not my first language. I have written a big novel - it's a real story from my life that happened to me when I was 20 years old. Of course, originally...
My name was Ngan, who was a Vietnamese girl in our scenario. My boyfriend was Ahem, who comes from India. We knew each other via Facebook. A month later, I invited him to come...
The birds on a dull-grey birch tree flew away as the cry of a child pierced the silence in the field. He was out in the open as he had a quarrel with the buzzing world. His...
(I was a simpleton in my childhood. Here comes the conclusive prove.) Once, when I was in 3 rd grade, Zaba, my classmate, gave me some money and said to me ”keep...
(This is a true story happened in my childhood and had changed my way of thinking. Please read it may be it helps you in any way and tell me if you find any mistake. And you surely...
04/09/2010 “Last year is not my year but this year is my year” one word of former Thai prime minister said before the res-shirt violence had occurred in Bangkok. Yesterday...
What is the difference between these two sentences? They were brought up in New YORK. OR They lived in New York. ...
Jimmy wells and Bob were fast friend. They lived in New York. Jimmy was 20 year old and Bob was 18 year old. Jimmy was honest and dutiful. He did not want to leave New York....
I'm writing on a story, and I've kind of lost my mind over it. I'm already on page 43, and the only super big thing that happened in that the main protagonist, Morgan, realized...
Hello everyone, I hope all of you are having a nice day. In here I wanted to share a story that I wrote. As you see, I need criticism for this story before going further. A little...
Daer friends, Thanks a lot to English forum where Ican express my gratitude for vwin spoken english and personality development course. I learnt many things of english besides...
Hey Could someone check this? I'd be very greatful My small project Why are there Chinese characters in the Japanese language? Nathalie Bartelius Introduction...
I wrote this short story just days back. No one has commented on it yet. Please anyone with time to spare, do comment on the story with most critical judgment. Any help would be...
It seems that with technological advances scenes fathers or mothers read online bedtime stories (Link removed by moderator. You can put links to your website in your profile)...
PAPA Captain Fred took out his laser beam and pointed it at Troy. “Say goodbye to Zarco,” he said with a confident smile. “Never!” Yelled out Troy. He too took out his laser beam...
The Ant and the Cricket - Part 1 :: Ancient Relationships Yo! I read the poem " The ant and the cricket " and I got this cool Idea! I converted the story into a book and added...
Hi guys, please help me in finding the mistakes I made in my essay . It's an assignment about snow melting . Notes : 1. Write 100-120 word. 2. The title is snow is melting. 3...
Please help us! Do you feel something strange in this text or everything is ok for english reader? The Brave Eaglet 1. Once upon a time a loving couple of eagles built a nest...
Peter Buxton had just turned thirteen. He was quite tall for his age and well-built. He had short blond hair and blue eyes. This morning he was wearing a clean white shirt...
This is part of my story. As a non native English speaker, I hope it reads well, but if it doesn't, I would be grateful if you could help me improve. Thank you. Stealia and her...
Hello. I'm glad to share my short story with you Hope you enjoy it! And please be mercyful with my (lot of) english errors. I'm still trying to perfect myself but i believe i have...