Hello, everyone I am glad I found this website. I love to write, but my grammar is poor and
I need someone to tell me where my error are here a story I am working on below this message.

Prologue

"Why can't we kill the old geezer now, Mary?" Billy asked his lover
standing in the middle of the kitchen wearing a black chauffeur uniform.

"Because I said so! lower your voice you want him to hear
us,"she said while chopping the steak into pieces then she put
the meat into a pot of steaming vegetables. She adjusted her
uniform she did this frequently, the old man didn't like the help
to look sloppy.Evan Hawking insisted she wear the uniform even after
seventeen years he never relented on anything especially on his employee.

"He can't hear upstairs...Beside he almost deaf asnyway,"
he said taking a long sharp knife from the kitchen cupboard he started to
rub it slowly against his face. Mary let out a long sigh it was getting
harder to control him especially after the incident with the old man cat.
Dark dark... I like.

Ok a few corrections:

Billy asked his lover
standing in the middle of the kitchen wearing a black chauffeur uniform.

(Who is wearing the uniform? is it the woman? if so then you could write:

Billy asked as he looked at his lover standing in the middle of the kitchen dressed in her chauffeur's uniform

Or even simpler:

standing in the middle of the kitchen wearing (her) black chauffeur uniform. )

And a few corrections for the rest of the text:

"Because I said so! lower your voice you want him to hear
us,"she said while chopping the steak into pieces and putting
(it) into a pot of steaming vegetables. She adjusted her
uniform(,) she did this frequently, the old man didn't like the help
to look sloppy. Evan Hawking insisted she wear the uniform (,) even after
seventeen years he never relented on anything especially on his employee.

"He can't hear upstairs...Beside he almost deaf asnyway,"
he said taking a long sharp knife from the kitchen cupboard (and rubbing) it slowly against his face. Mary let out a long sigh, it was getting
harder to control him especially after the incident with the old man cat.

I like the idea of an unhinged homicidal maniac being controlled by the sexy woman in the chauffeur's uniform... Maybe I'm getting ahead of the story here [:^)] .

Try to seperate the flow of the text with more punctuation, If you are moving on to a different point, idea or description that is when to use those commas!!
Thank you, I made the correction.
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