I was really happy that you came here to see us! few moments or long time we met in. its never matter. but you came here to be with us. its not easy. avi dada is away so far from our lands. You live in Dumdum which is too far away from us and few days left in your hands to stay here for your vacation. but in one time we met together again! That is what i cant imagine. Well, Avi dada is proud of you and senses that you are his own more than other sisters. I also agree with him. We love you too as my sister! Ma is very happy with you and told me about you! You are such a wonderful person!

Enjoy there and study well. I hope you have reached Blr safely and everything is not messed up with you. Make good use of reading the book as my small gift.

take care

love

Anirban
As well as the errors marked make sure you start all sentences with a capital letter, that I is always a captial letter and that people's names always start with a capital letter. You are overusing the exclamation mark!

I was really happy that you came here to see us! (few moments or long time we met in. its never matter. but you came here to be with us. Not sure what you are trying to say here) it's not easy. avi dada is away so far from our lands. You live in Dumdum which is too far away from us and you were only able to stay here for a few days but one day we'll meet again. That is what i can imagine. Well, Avi dada is proud of you and senses that you are his own more than other sisters. I also agree with him. We love you too as my sister! Ma is very happy with you and told me about you! You are such a wonderful person!

Enjoy your time there and study well. I hope you have reached Blr safely and everything is ok with you. Make good use of reading the book as my small gift.

take care

love

Anirban
I would like to become good art of english. I don't know How? Help me please.
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