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Would you say that the following sentences have been structured properly? If no, how can I improve them? Please let me know. Thank you!

Vertex advised us that the earliest availabe date is on the 21st March, but we have told them to raise the job as a matter of urgency.We will advise you as soon as we receive an update from them.

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The structure is OK,but here are a few edits.

Vertex has advised us that the earliest available date is on the 21st March, but we have told them to treat the job as a matter of urgency.We will advise you as soon as we receive an update from them.

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Vertex is a big organisation, should its be in plural?

In everyday English, you can say it either way.

Vertex has advised . . . You are thinking of Vertex as a company

Vertex have advised . . . You are thinking of the people who work at Vertex

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Would this imply to multi-national companies? For example: Nike,Sainsbury's, Tesco, Argos, Primark, Ballymore and Mitie

Hi Clive. I have changed the tenses just to see if they are correct. Please see below.

Vertex advised us that the earliest available date is on the 21st March, but we told them to treat the job as a matter of urgency. We will advise you as soon as we receive an update from them.

Would this imply to multi-national companies? For example: Nike,Sainsbury's, Tesco, Argos, Primark, Ballymore and Mitie

yes

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