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Sub- "An issue on joining date "

"Since I am having personal important work, Unfortunately, I am unable to join as per your said date(on the offer letter). Please reschedule it to 26/01/2018."


Please suggest this sub(Any alternative would be suitable for this scenario) and content in a formal.

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Here are a few comments.

Where I live, we don't abbreviate the word 'subject'. It's already a short word.

Where I live, we don't talk about a joining date. We talk about the date I am to start work.

Where i live, we usually say eg Dear Mr Smith, using the name of the person who wrote you the offer letter

Your letter needs to be a lot more apologetic. Don't make it sound like your personal work is more important than working for your new employer.

Clive

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Thank you for your opinion. However, Would you mind do you have any formal samples of this concern?

How about this?

https://www.toppr.com/guides/english/writing/formal-letters/

You need to decide on the level of politeness that you want. eg Indian English seems excessively polite in Canada,, but that is what the norm is in India.

Clive