Can someone kindly offer any suggestion or comments for the below mention letter:

"I, Megan Smith do hereby apply for the President’s license for myself and my fiancé, Tom Bartlett so that we may get married before the usual time issued for a marriage licence.

Our explanation for this request is due to my fiancé’s employment. He is currently self-employed and owns a fairly new business called “Esc 85” and because of the season being Christmas he has to return to work immediately.

For your convenience, we have enclosed Tom’s business card for your files. Thank you for your prompt consideration of this request."

The Explanation for this letter is that a normal marriage licence takes 20 days to issue and due to Tom's employment situation we would like to speed the process by applying for a President's Licence so that it can be done in 2 instead of 4 weeks. This is for an overseas marriage. Thank You!
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"I, Megan Smith do hereby apply for the President’s license for myself and my fiancé, Tom Bartlett so that we may get married before the usual time issued for a marriage licence.

We are lodging this Application due to my fiancé’s employment situation. He is currently self-employed and owns a fairly new business called “Esc 85”; and because of the approaching Christmas season, he needs to return to work immediately.

For your convenience, we have enclosed Tom’s business card for your files. Thank you for your prompt consideration of this request."
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