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I would like to compliant and suggest about MBA program (International MBA)

Dear Project Manager,

I have sen your program from many advertisement.This is a intersting program and also I used to join with your last Open House but there I saw many Thai language such as your notice and your website.I think,it should have internatiomal atmospheer more and this program suite for anyone who are not finish or work in business fields thus it can not offer to anyone that would like to have a speciliztion in any fields like marketing, finanace and step up to top manager.

You can not be in the thing that you told any one but your action

I look forword to join with you in the future

Best regards

Ab
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debangkokI would like to compliant and suggest about MBA program (International MBA)

Dear Project Manager,

I have seen sen your program in from many advertisements.This is a intersting program that interests me, so and also I went to used to join with your last Open House. When I was but there, I saw that the many Thai language was frequently used, such as in your notices and on your website. I think, that the program it should have more of an international atmosphere. Further, more and this program seems suited for anyone who are did not finish (school?) or works in business fields (I cannot understand what you mean here). thus It does can not offer the right course of study to anyone who that would like to have a speciliztion specialize in any fields like marketing, and finanace. Education in these subjects is required for a person to advance in management. and step up to top manager.

You can not be in the thing that you told any one but your action (I cannot understand what you mean here)

I look forword to join with you in the future (I don't understand why you would like to study here if it will not prepare you for the jobs you aspire to.)

Best regards

Ab

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Hello:

Please tell me whether you are in agreement (compliant) or are not satisfied (complaint)? I am not sure of your usage.

Thank you.
Dee
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I would like to study in real international MBA progra, thus the program should communicate with english language and including notice ,website

Thank you for your attention

ab
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Thank you so much for your kind revise it to me

for your quetion the detail as below

1.who are did not finish or works in business:

I mean that this programe is suitable for whom that did not graduate from business field or did not work in business field

because this program prepared who had not business backgroud.

2.You can not be in the think that you told any one but your action.

I mean that this program advertised on many media that it was international MBA

but in the real thing this program sometime used local language.

thus I think the real internation MBA is not mean the program have many advertisement and tell many people that it is real international MBA ,it 's up on the way that you communicate with your student.

3.I look forward to join with you in the future

I would like to say that if the program have a real international more in the future I prefer to join it,

Please advise me about these, I am so poor english
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