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Does this tagline correct?
A mysterious event with deadly result
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AnonymousSo I came out with "An unpredictable incident with a deadly result". My question to you is does this tagline make sense?
It makes sense, but there is no way of judging whether it is appropriate.
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Does this tagline phrase correct?

An unpredictable incident with deadly result
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What do you mean by 'tag line'? Is there more to your sentences that you have not posted?
Yes, I need a tagline and headline for my article. So I came out with "An unpredictable incident with a deadly result". My question to you is does this tagline make sense? I'm sorry you may ignore the "A mysterious event with deadly result".n Sorry for any inconvenience caused.
An unpredictable incident with deadly result
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AnonymousDoes this tagline correct?
Is this tagline correct?