Take A Drink?

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Hi. I'm writing a script.

Joel does bench presses. He finishes the set, grabs a bottle of water and takes a drink.

Two questions:

1) Would you write 'Joel does bench presses' or just 'Joel bench presses'?

2) Is 'takes a drink' okay here or would you write something else?

Thanks.

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anonymous1) Would you write 'Joel does bench presses' or just 'Joel bench presses'?

does

anonymous2) Is 'takes a drink' okay here or would you write something else?

It's OK if you want to leave the business to others.

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