The diagram below shows how avocado oil is extracted.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.


The process flowchart illustrates the extraction of avocado oil.

Overall, there are six main stages in producing avocado oil. In addition, the unwanted materials are delivered to an avocado orchard to grow more trees.

The first stage of manufacturing avocado oil involves the selection of fresh fruits. And then they are washed and brought into a crusher and a blender. The avocado is removed the skins and seeds in the crusher while the blended materials go through two stages of centrifuge. The first stage is the removal of solid waste at the maximum temperature from 45 to 50 degree to yield the liquids. The second stage requires the removal of water, leaving behind the raw oil. The oil is then put into a filter, at which point the clarified oil is made and ready to be dispensed to customers.

Three ingredients that are removed during the extraction including rotten fruit, seeds, skins of the avocado and solid waste are collected in a container to the avocado garden to plant and fertilize trees.


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The process flowchart illustrates the extraction of avocado oil.

Overall, there are six main stages in producing avocado oil. In addition, the unwanted materials are delivered to an avocado orchard to grow more trees.

The first stage of manufacturing avocado oil involves the selection of fresh fruits. And then they are washed and brought into a crusher and a blender. The avocado is removed the skins and seeds in the crusher while the blended materials go through two stages of centrifuge. The first stage is the removal of solid waste at the maximum temperature from 45 to 50 degree to yield the liquids. The second stage requires the removal of water, leaving behind the raw oil. The oil is then put into a filter, at which point the clarified oil is made and ready to be dispensed to customers.

Three ingredients that are removed during the extraction including rotten fruit, seeds, skins of the avocado and solid waste are collected in a container to the avocado garden to plant and fertilize trees.

The diagram below shows how avocado oil is extracted.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The process flowchart illustrates the extraction of avocado oil.

Overall, there are six main stages in producing avocado oil. In addition, the unwanted materials are delivered to an avocado orchard to grow more trees.

The first stage of manufacturing avocado oil involves the selection of fresh fruits. And then they are washed and brought into a crusher and a blender. The avocado is removed the skins and seeds in the crusher while the blended materials go through two stages of centrifuge. The first stage is the removal of solid waste at the maximum temperature from 45 to 50 degree to yield the liquids. The second stage requires the removal of water, leaving behind the raw oil. The oil is then put into a filter, at which point the clarified oil is made and ready to be dispensed to customers.

Three ingredients that are removed during the extraction including rotten fruit, seeds, skins of the avocado and solid waste are collected in a container to the avocado garden to plant and fertilize trees.


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The process flowchart illustrates the extraction of avocado oil from avocado fruits.

Overall, there are six main stages in producing avocado oil. (Lack of coherence and cohesion. Very poor transition.) In addition, the unwanted materials are delivered to an avocado orchard to grow more trees.


Overall there are three main stages, selecting and cleaning the fruit, separating and crushing the pulp, and filtering the oil. The seeds along with the skin and solids are not wasted; they are returned to the orchard for fertilizing and planting new trees.


In a process flow, combine closely-related steps into groups. You can call these "stages". Describe each one in a short phrase in the overview paragraph.

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The process flowchart illustrates the extraction of oil from avocado fruits.

Overall, there are three main stages: selecting and cleaning the fruit, separating and crushing the pulp, and filtering the oil. The seeds along with the skin and solids are not wasted; they are returned to the orchard for fertilizing and planting new trees.

The first stage of manufacturing avocado oil involves the selection of fresh fruits. And then they are washed before being brought into a crusher and a blender. After that, the avocado is removed the skins and seeds in the crusher while the blended materials go through two stages of centrifuge. The first stage is the removal of solid waste at the maximum temperature from 45 to 50 degrees to yield the liquids. The second stage requires the removal of water, leaving behind the raw oil. The oil is then put into a filter, at which point the clarified oil is made and ready to be dispensed to customers.

Three ingredients that are abandoned during the extraction including rotten fruits, seeds, skins of the avocados and solid waste are collected in a container to the avocado garden to plant and fertilize trees.


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AlpheccaStars(Lack of coherence and cohesion. Very poor transition.) In addition,

Can you please suggest some words that can be used for transition?

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