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Nowadays, people in some countries are living in a “throw away” society, which means that people use things for a short time and then throw them away. What are the causes of this and what problems does it cause

Currently, people in some nations are living in a “throw away” society, which means that people use things for a short period after that throw them away. This essay will look at some primary causes and some problems of this.

There are a number of reasons for countries tend to throw away society. The first reason is people tent to purchase much clothes, mobile, and so on but it is not necessary and they use in a short period although all product still activities. For example, many of today’s teenagers spend nearly 35 millions buying iPhone X to show that they are wealthy and fashionable even though their old phones are still in good condition, perfectly functional and still work. it leads to a waste of money therefore they get into serious debt about financeAnother reason is many companies produce the mass production of something with low quality because of they focus on consequence but they do not care about high quality and sell for customers use .These products are much cheaper and more convenient than durable ones, hence, attract a large number of customers. This causes destroy the environment and global warming.Environmental degradation is serious problem of society that is directly contaminates soil and water, air and so onIn conclusion, there are various factors leading to the advent of our throwaway society this is increasing consumer debt and environmental damage hence it is two main problems which result from this society./.

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You need 4 paragraphs. You have 2.

You write run-on sentences.

There are misused vocabulary words.


Currently, people in some nations are living in a “throw away” society, which means that people use things for a short period and after that throw them away. (You will not get points for copying the topic.) . This essay will look at some primary causes and some problems of this.

(Do not tell the examiner "I will write about the causes and problems". That says nothing but the instructions you were given. You need to write your own words, not copy the instructions.

It will not get a good score. Never mention "my essay". Instead, write a thesis statement with an idea of the main argument points. e.g.

People discard good usable items because they want the latest items and fashions, and, besides other problems, this causes garbage dumps to increase and pollute the environment. )

There are a number of reasons for countries tend to throw away society. (People throw away CDs, clothes, and shoes. They do not throw away other people!) The first reason is people tent to purchase much clothes, mobile, (mobile is an adjective. You need a noun.) and so on but it is not necessary and they use in a short period although all product still activities. (That is not good English. I do not know what you mean.) For example, many of today’s teenagers spend nearly 35 millions (Does each teen have 35 million dollars?) buying iPhone X to show that they are wealthy and fashionable even though their old phones are still in good condition and perfectly functional and still work. (That repeats the same idea. ) it (Begin every sentence with a capital letter.) leads to a waste of money (run-on sentence) and therefore they get into serious debt. about financeAnother reason is many companies produce the mass goods production of something with low quality because of they focus on consequence (wrong word.) but they do not care about high quality and sell for customers use . These products are much cheaper and more convenient than durable ones, (run-on sentence) but they hence, attract a large number of customers. This causes destroy (Destroy is a verb. You need a noun here.) the environment and global warming.Environmental degradation is serious problem of society that is directly contaminates ("is contaminates" is not a valid verb form.) soil and water, air and so onIn conclusion, there are various factors leading to the advent (wrong word) of our throwaway society this (run-on sentence) is increasing consumer debt and environmental damage (run-on sentence) hence it (wrong word) is (wrong form) there are two main problems which result from this society./.