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Write about the following topic.

Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.


It can be argued that living in urban area can have some effect into people's health. In this essay, I am going to demonstrate the reason why I agree with this extent, but in some situation I think there are also some valuable when living in huge cities


On the one hand, the waste which come from factories and the huge amount of cabon dioxide that come from vehicles and industrial areas or even come from kitchen in our house can harm into people's health. Especially has a huge effect to older people and children who can be harm easily. Not only that, pollition air, water and soil in urban area can lead to a lot of disease such as allergy which is really familar, but more important it can lead to dead disease such as cancer


In the other hand, It hard to be denied about the values when live in a big cities, espeacially in technologies and medical system. Nomally, big hospital tend to be placed in huge cities. That is a reason why this area can have a modern medical system than others. Not only that, people who live in urban area can have chance to have a better health care come from insurance polices. Take Japan for an example, this country have a lot of elderly people, so the Japanese government are having a lot of policies that help their citizens can use the medical system for free. That is reason why older people and children in japan, especially who live in big cites such as Tokyo can use the best medical service in the world but do not need to pay any fee.


In conclusion, there are a lot of reason that can harm to people's health when their live in big cities, but the convenient and good medical service can also help increase the healthy of citizens

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It can be argued that living in large urban [ 1] areas can have some detrimental effect into on people's health. In this essay, I am going to demonstrate the reason why I agree with this to some extent, but in some situation I think there are also some valuable when living in huge [ 2] large cities also has its advantages.

On the one hand, [ 3] many large cities today are quite polluted. The waste which come from factories and the huge amount of carbon dioxide that come emissions from vehicles and industrial areas or even come from kitchen in our house can harm into people's health. This especially has a huge effect to impacts older people and children. who can be harm easily. Not only that, In addition, pollution of the air, water and soil in urban [ 1] areas can lead to a lot of disease illnesses such as [ 1] allergies which is really common in large cities, familar, but more important it can lead to dead and even to fatal [ 1] diseases such as cancer.

In On the other hand, It hard to be denied about the values when live living in a big large cities [ 3]

is not without its disadvantages. , espeacially in technologies and medical system. Nomally, big Large cities typically have several large hospitals, and those tend to be well equipped with modern facilities and have highly experienced doctors and health professionals working in them. placed in huge cities. That is a reason why this area can have a modern medical system than others. Not only that, people who live in urban area can have chance to have a better health care come from insurance polices. [ 4] Take Japan for an example, this country have a lot of elderly people, so the Japanese government are having a lot of policies that help their citizens can use the medical system for free. That is reason why older people and children in japan, especially who live in big cites such as Tokyo can use the best medical service in the world but do not need to pay any fee.

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[ 1]: When we talk about something in general terms, we use the plural (if it’s countable).

[ 2]: “huge” is informal.

[ 3]: The topic sentence of a body paragraph should be general enough to cover the entire scope of the paragraph. It should not be about one particular point in that paragraph.

[ 4]: That example is irrelevant. The question is not about ageing populations. Instead, you can:

a- Give an example,

b- talk about how some major cities are tackling pollution

For your first body paragraph, you might want to mention the lack of green spaces and the fast pace of life.

Revise your essay and repost it below.