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The line graph compares three business in terms of waste ouput between the years 2000 to 2015.

Overall, it is clear that the total amounts of waste from company A and B is gradually declined over the years, which contradicts greatly from the escalation of company C. From the lowest starting position in the graph, company C manages to become the highest waste production company in 15 years.

In 2000, company A and B started at 12 tonnes and 8 tonnes of waste produced respectively while the figure of company C was just over 3 tonnes. Over the period of 5 years, company A experienced a slight declination and drop below 12 tonnes whereas both B and C rocketed at the same rate.

For the next 10 years, company A continued to cut its waste output to under 9 tonnes. After reached its peak in 2005, company B amounts of produced wastes declined drastically and touched the lowest point compare to company A and C. And with the annual increment over 15 years, company C becomes the largest producer of waste in 2015.

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The line graph compares three businesses in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 to and 2015.

Overall, it is clear that the total amounts of waste from company companies A and B is gradually declined in that period, over the years, which contradicts greatly from was opposite to the escalation upward trend of company C. From the lowest starting position in the graph, company C manages managed to become the highest waste production company producer in 15 years.

In 2000, company companies A and B started at 12 tonnes and 8 tonnes of waste produced respectively, while the figure of for company C was just over 3 tonnes. Over the period of next 5 years, company A experienced a slight decline in its waste production, declination and drop below 12 tonnes whereas the waste made by both B and C rose markedly rocketed at the same rate.

For the subsequent [ “next” is not wrong; “subsequent” is a synonym] next 10 years, company A continued to cut its waste output, to which dipped to under 9 tonnes in 2015. After reached reaching its peak in 2005, the amounts of waste produced by company B amounts of produced wastes declined drastically and touched the lowest point compared to the amounts of company companies A and C. And with the annual increment over 15 years, Finally, the waste made by company C continued to rise, becomes and that company became the largest producer of waste in by 2015.

[IELTS score: 7-7.5]

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